To Want More
What would you give to see that smile? (a poem)24 total reviews
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem. As humans we are never happy with what we have. We always want more and better to sooth our egoes, while many don't even have the necessary to survive.
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A very well-written poem. As humans we are never happy with what we have. We always want more and better to sooth our egoes, while many don't even have the necessary to survive.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2017
Comment from country ranch writer
CHILD WANTS TO KNOW THE ANSWERS TO THE QUESTIONS BUT LETS IT PASS FOR THE TREATMENTS HE MUST HAVE FOR THE ILLNESS THAT HAS KEPT HIM IM THE HOSPITAL. HE WILL ALWAYS WONDER WHAT COMES NEXT
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CHILD WANTS TO KNOW THE ANSWERS TO THE QUESTIONS BUT LETS IT PASS FOR THE TREATMENTS HE MUST HAVE FOR THE ILLNESS THAT HAS KEPT HIM IM THE HOSPITAL. HE WILL ALWAYS WONDER WHAT COMES NEXT
Comment Written 08-Jan-2017
Comment from J. Dark
Loved this Dawn. Such a clever twist at the end and I particularly like the elegance of this form. I would have loved to have given you a six but the site wouldn't let me. ð???xxx
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reply by the author on 08-Jan-2017
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Loved this Dawn. Such a clever twist at the end and I particularly like the elegance of this form. I would have loved to have given you a six but the site wouldn't let me. ð???xxx
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Comment Written 08-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2017
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Huh? Okay, the virtual is wonderful anyway (and it's so good to see you)! Thank you so much!
Comment from royowen
Beautifully scribed Dawn, as all your work is, the narrative is lots of fun, it has a lovely meandering theme and bops along in its own merry way, with a delicious flippancy, well done, my friend in no set meter and couplet rhyming, well done, Blessings, Roy
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reply by the author on 08-Jan-2017
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Beautifully scribed Dawn, as all your work is, the narrative is lots of fun, it has a lovely meandering theme and bops along in its own merry way, with a delicious flippancy, well done, my friend in no set meter and couplet rhyming, well done, Blessings, Roy
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Comment Written 08-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 08-Jan-2017
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Thanks Roy. It's actually another pitch for donations for Sick Kids Hospital in Toronto. I did one a couple of years back and thought it's time for another one. That second video is one of their ads, and it's magnificent.
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Well done
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Thanks so much. Having laptop problems, so rushing my replies. Much appreciate the support, though!
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That's fine Dawn