Comment from William Ross

Excellent

Nicely done, this picture could be either of sunset or sunrise. mixture of rhyme, near rhyme, makes a good read. Good job on the challenge, have a good day.

 Comment Written 29-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 29-Aug-2016

Thanks for the comments.

Comment from flylikeaneagle

Excellent

DanPald: we can count on God's beauty and blessings new every day. I like the prayer does rise in the sun line. We need to rejoice in each day! Nice poem of faith. God bless! flylikeaneagle

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 Comment Written 29-Aug-2016

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reply by the author on 29-Aug-2016

Thanks for the comments.