A Book of Love
Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "If I Could"Assorted poems of love
33 total reviews
Comment from The Mom/DarleneThomson
Missy,
I love it. Even if it made me sad. I love the artwork. I need to send you an email. Love everything you write. It is moody and slightly dark but it is love which you always write so well.
Blessings,
Darlene
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2018
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Missy,
I love it. Even if it made me sad. I love the artwork. I need to send you an email. Love everything you write. It is moody and slightly dark but it is love which you always write so well.
Blessings,
Darlene
Comment Written 06-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2018
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HUGS
Blessings to you for your review and your patience while it took so long to respond.
Always
Justafan
Missy
Comment from heyjude
Justafan, I'm glad it's not autobiographic. It is sad. I'm sure this
has happened in lots of relationships though. A person keeps
on wanting to be able to restore the relationship, but they know it
can't happen. I like the last two lines the best .... NOW... if I can just
get my Soul...to believe it.
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2018
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Justafan, I'm glad it's not autobiographic. It is sad. I'm sure this
has happened in lots of relationships though. A person keeps
on wanting to be able to restore the relationship, but they know it
can't happen. I like the last two lines the best .... NOW... if I can just
get my Soul...to believe it.
Comment Written 06-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2018
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Blessings to you for your review and your patience while it took so long to respond.
Always
Justafan
Missy
Comment from royowen
It's funny how feeling bad comes out, it tends to manifest itself in bad thoughts, or negative language, but I guess we'd have to regard as just a bad feeling. Other other hand if we feel good, the world looks rosy, we smile, and the world smiles back! Well written, beautifully expressed, my friend, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2018
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It's funny how feeling bad comes out, it tends to manifest itself in bad thoughts, or negative language, but I guess we'd have to regard as just a bad feeling. Other other hand if we feel good, the world looks rosy, we smile, and the world smiles back! Well written, beautifully expressed, my friend, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 06-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2018
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Blessings to you for your review and your patience while it took so long to respond.
Always
Justafan
Missy
Comment from Lisa Deverick
Your words tell a story of grief and this reader can feel the heartache you have penned. Typically this comes out through the soul. I hope you find your way soon friend.
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2018
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Your words tell a story of grief and this reader can feel the heartache you have penned. Typically this comes out through the soul. I hope you find your way soon friend.
Comment Written 06-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2018
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Blessings to you for your review and your patience while it took so long to respond.
Always
Justafan
Missy
Comment from Sankey
Awwww, sad. Got a shock to hear the song coming out. Can't hear it very well due to my hearing problems. Thanks for sharing, anyway. Love the teary picture. Good work.
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2018
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Awwww, sad. Got a shock to hear the song coming out. Can't hear it very well due to my hearing problems. Thanks for sharing, anyway. Love the teary picture. Good work.
Comment Written 06-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2018
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Blessings to you for your review and your patience while it took so long to respond.
Always
Justafan
Missy
Comment from Dean Kuch
It's not an easy thing to do sometimes, is it, Missy?
There's little else in the whole wide, wonderful world that hurts more deeply than unrequited love. What's worse is putting your all--your everthing into a relationship only to find out it's been one-sided, all along.
Nicely done, and well presented.
Love the musical accompaniment, heh-heh...
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2018
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It's not an easy thing to do sometimes, is it, Missy?
There's little else in the whole wide, wonderful world that hurts more deeply than unrequited love. What's worse is putting your all--your everthing into a relationship only to find out it's been one-sided, all along.
Nicely done, and well presented.
Love the musical accompaniment, heh-heh...
Comment Written 06-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2018
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Blessings to you for your review and your patience while it took so long to respond. I have missed you.
Always
Justafan
Missy
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Anytime, Missy.
You're more than welcome.
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I?ve posted three and I haven?t seen your name til now, sugga!! Hugs!
You know I loves ya!
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Yeah, I apologize, Missy. I've been stuck here in the hospital since October 8 and haven't been writing much.
Congestive heart failure again.
Hopefully I'll be outta here soon.
Hugs!
~Dean♡♡♡♡
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Omg. I had no idea!
Move over I?m having knee replacement surgery Nov 27.
You can throw a leg over my good one! Lmao
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Hahaha, you gotta deal. ;)
Comment from Ulla
Hello Missy, it's such a long time since I've seen your writing. Welcome back. This is a lovely poem and so sad. I do hope you do feel better now though. All the best. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2018
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Hello Missy, it's such a long time since I've seen your writing. Welcome back. This is a lovely poem and so sad. I do hope you do feel better now though. All the best. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 06-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2018
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Blessings to you for your review and your patience while it took so long to respond.
Always
Justafan
Missy
Comment from ciliverde
Very moving, I'd bet most of us have been there. No, they don't know how we wait, in agony for them to call, and they do not. The silence is deafening. It takes a lot of strength to not just call yourself...ugh, remembering those days are painful! Well done,
Carol
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2018
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Very moving, I'd bet most of us have been there. No, they don't know how we wait, in agony for them to call, and they do not. The silence is deafening. It takes a lot of strength to not just call yourself...ugh, remembering those days are painful! Well done,
Carol
Comment Written 06-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2018
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Blessings to you for your review and your patience while it took so long to respond.
Always
Justafan
Missy
Comment from P1
it may not be autobiographical to you but
it certainly resonates loudly with me and has
given me goose bumps and a tear in my eye
and your words brought back a lot of memories
beautifully and tastefully written and a pleasure to
read and review
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2018
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it may not be autobiographical to you but
it certainly resonates loudly with me and has
given me goose bumps and a tear in my eye
and your words brought back a lot of memories
beautifully and tastefully written and a pleasure to
read and review
Comment Written 06-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2018
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Oh my! Thank you for the lovely 6.
Blessings to you for your review and your patience while it took so long to respond.
Always
Justafan
Missy
Comment from Joy Graham
I got myself into a similar mood today. Thinking about my school friends and how they are all successful with university degrees. All I ever wanted back then was a friend. I guess I was too wild and hyper to qualify as a friend? Or maybe I'm putting too much pressure on myself. I am who I am.
Sorry you're feeling down. Sending hugs through cyberspace.
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2018
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I got myself into a similar mood today. Thinking about my school friends and how they are all successful with university degrees. All I ever wanted back then was a friend. I guess I was too wild and hyper to qualify as a friend? Or maybe I'm putting too much pressure on myself. I am who I am.
Sorry you're feeling down. Sending hugs through cyberspace.
Comment Written 06-Jun-2016
reply by the author on 22-Oct-2018
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The loneliness about tore me down but I fought through and I am stronger now and back to writing.Blessings to you for your review and your patience while it took so long to respond.. Thank you Joy.