Summer's eve
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Comment from rjuselius
This is a fine piece of poetry but it has 15 words instead of 14. It's easily corrected. The third line could be for example "floral whiffs".
Thanks for sharing!
Good luck !
Blessings!
Rebekka x
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reply by the author on 24-May-2016
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This is a fine piece of poetry but it has 15 words instead of 14. It's easily corrected. The third line could be for example "floral whiffs".
Thanks for sharing!
Good luck !
Blessings!
Rebekka x
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Comment Written 22-May-2016
reply by the author on 24-May-2016
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Thank you indeed for this excellent review zanya