Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)

Excellent

You are so very right. I don't think I know any adults that carefree. Oh to be that innocent and carefree for just a day. I was for a couple minutes as I pondered your poem. Well done, my friend~Debbie

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2016

---

reply by the author on 15-Mar-2016

Hi Debbie. I am glad you had a little moment and pleased you felt reminicent with my poem . It just came out like this and I am rather pleased with it too Many thanks for your lovely support my friend. Cheers Christine 😀

Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin

Excellent

Hi, Christine

= Nice, happy-go-lucky poem for the picture.
= Good to see you pop up. (*<*)
= Have a good one.

* Cheers & Blessings *
Keep Smilin'... Jackie/Jax (*>*)

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2016

---

reply by the author on 15-Mar-2016

Hi Jax Yes still here trying to catch up with everyones posts. It is so busy but I love it Thanks for having a read and for your lovely support as always Cheers Christine. a fun challenge once again 😀

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

I enjoyed your challenge poem. I like the way you use the same word, or a form of it, to start the next line after the word first appears in your poem. I agree with your thoughts about the way a child reacts compared to adults. Good job and thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2016

---

reply by the author on 15-Mar-2016

Hi jannypan. My repotitious word was my attempt to be like the stick along the fence something a bit different LOL , yes we seem to lose oir inner child along the way but I do release her occasionally. Chhers for a great day Christine 😀

Comment from Joy Graham

Excellent

I really like the form you used here, Chrissy :) It's a chain format. Really nicely done. You captured the picture in your words nicely. I still do things like this on occasion, lol! Especially when my grandkids are with me. Part of me never grew up.

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2016

---

reply by the author on 15-Mar-2016

Hi Joy I am glad there still are some child/adults out there. I too can be as ' bad' as the grandies but have so much funLOL. I really didn't know what format it was I just made it up as I went alongl like the stick along the fence. Thanks for your great review and rating. Cheers Christine😀

Comment from William Ross

Excellent

Yes, great job on this picture challenge, Something a lot of no doubt done as a child. Only have to be more careful on the streets today. have a great day.

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2016

---

reply by the author on 15-Mar-2016

Hi William , Yes definitely guilty of the old stick along the fence and this image brought back those good old days so It was fun to write this. Thanks so much for your read and review and you too have a great day Cheers Christine😀

Comment from royowen

Excellent

Well done for giving words to this marvellously expressive image of a child scraping a stick along a fence, I did the self same thing myself as a child, I can't quite remember what was on my mind, not much I suspect. But you've captured that image in its essence, well done, well written, blessings, Roy

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2016

---

reply by the author on 15-Mar-2016

Hi Roy . Who didn't run the stick along a fence LOL. The image really wrote my poem and it was a fun one to do also. Oh to be care-free again would be great and Chhers my friend for your support Christine 😀.

reply by royowen on 15-Mar-2016

Well done Christine.

Comment from Ekim777

Exceptional

You splay your images with captivating grace but more than that, you display your interlocking words with a consummate sense of experience. Don't we all recall something of our youth. -Ekim777

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2016

---

reply by the author on 15-Mar-2016

Hi Ekimm777. Wow thanks you very much for your lovely review and giving me 6 stars for this one. My interlocking words just flowed out once I did the first line and then like the stick along the fence continued the run. so glad you thought it worthy ( I do remeber doing this as a kid too LOL ) So appreciate you support Many Cheers Christine😀😀

Comment from Writeling

Excellent

Hi, The poem fits the image so well.... and I really admire the way you've given the flow strength by linking the lines with following words. Clever. With best wishes, Writeling

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2016

---

reply by the author on 15-Mar-2016

Hi Writelinf, Many thanks for your lovely review and for your comments for my poem . I enjoyed the challenge and this style just wrote itself . Cheers for your best wishes Christine😀

Comment from PoemsOfDD

Excellent

Chrissy, I really like this poem you have written. I enjoyed the simplistic way you have composed it and the way you have followed on the next sentence with the word from the end of the sentence before it. Very clever. Care free, if only our lives could be more like that. Thank you for this enjoyable read. ~ DD

This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2016

---

reply by the author on 15-Mar-2016

Hi PoemsOfDD, I did enjoy writing this and after the first 2 lines it just flowed out so I am glad you enjoyed this composition. Yes to be care- free a bit more would be great. I try to have some time out but seem to be busier and busier. Thanks so much for reading and rating this so well Cheers Christine😀

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Lovely photo for the poem.
-Nicely written with good imagery.
-Your poem brings back days gone by:
"streets with fences made of wood
wooden stick to make a noise"
-I also like the theme of being care-free, free to wander the streets.
-Thanks for sharing.

This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.

 Comment Written 14-Mar-2016

---

reply by the author on 15-Mar-2016

Hi respa1. Thanks for reading and reviewing this so nicely I always enjoy your comments and time taken to make them . A fun challenge I just made up the style LOL Many Cheers Christine😀

reply by Pam (respa) on 15-Mar-2016

You are very welcome. I am glad you appreciate the comments. That means a lot. You will have to come up with a name for this invented form:) Nicely done.

reply by the author on 15-Mar-2016

Yes I will LOL Cheers

reply by Pam (respa) on 15-Mar-2016

I will be waiting to see what it is, how you do it, and another poem. Maybe I will try one:)