Comment from Dawn Munro

Excellent

...sigh... I'm a bit more independent than this protagonist I fear, and hope my happiness doesn't depend on anyone else, but I must admit, it's easy to feel incomplete without that one, true mate. That is what this gorgeous poem says to me - a true mate found, the "charity" that's biblical - flawless. I wish you all the best in the contest, sweet Southern belle!

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 20-Jan-2016

Sista, I will need a ton of prayer's to win this from the Committee. I am terrified but, felt I owed it to myself to venture here again. I have grown over the past 10 months due largely to writers just like you, who have taken me under their wing and given so freely their thoughts on my work. :)

Love ya,
Missy

Comment from busses

Excellent

This is a beautiful love story. I decided to call it a story because of its content and the way it was told to not your audience but to the man you love. This was well written and true to every point of love, of non-love and of love to be. God Bless

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 20-Jan-2016

I read this and wanted to know a lil something about the author, so I went to your page and goodness me, you have such talent and passion in your works. So, for you to give me an Excellent rating, means a lot to me :) Thank you.

Missy

reply by busses on 20-Jan-2016

Thank You so much justafan, and thanks for becoming a fan. I will use your critique on this one I think. TY for the input. always welcome. :)

Comment from teols2016

Excellent

This is very nice. It gives hope to those in dark places seeking someone to trust and love. I enjoyed this read and wish you luck in the contest. Well done.

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 21-Jan-2016

:) hi Teols, thanks for the encouraging review. I will take your good wishes to heart as the Committee, takes control.

Always,
Missy

Comment from Carolyn 'Deaton' Stephens

Excellent

Hi there,
How sweet, I think you have a worthy entry here.
You are so right, it is difficult, if not almost impossible
to find honesty in relationships, and not all are of the romantic
nature..
I liked 'you traced a heart on his chest,' and wanted to crawl right inside...
Best wishes,
:-) Carolyn

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 21-Jan-2016

Hi Carolyn, gee thanks hon for the lovely review. I am scared of the Committee....but oh well. I wanted to try.

Missy

Comment from TAB_that's me

Excellent

Sometimes one has to go through many bad relationships to find the right one to love:) Nice love poem Missy. Good luck in the contest.

Teresa

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 21-Jan-2016

Hi, Teresa, thanks hon ...I hope live is treating you well. Miss you here and Facebook. :)

Missy

Comment from fimarie78

Excellent

Beautiful x I love the way you told us your story through your poem.It had an interesting shape with the three line stanzas. So glad you found happiness. Fiona

 Comment Written 19-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 21-Jan-2016

Fiona, a lovely name :)
Thanks you so much for this lovely review of my work.

Always justafan,
Missy

Comment from JTStone

Excellent

Whoa girl--you almost got it right, but my eyes are hazel...
Seriously, you always keep me guessing, don't you? I just read a poem from you that says love is fleeting. Now in this poem, your head over heels in a forever type of romance.
Mystery; thy name is Missy...
Jimmy



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 Comment Written 19-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 21-Jan-2016

Dang it! Crucial error...grrr!! Love the way you pick at me, Jimmy!
Thanks hon for the "guessing game", review :)

Missy

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

What a lovely poem filled with trust and love for your honest guy. Without integrity and respect, relationships cannot survive. Good job on this love poem. Marilyn

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 Comment Written 19-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 21-Jan-2016

Thanks again, Marilyn. Honesty is indeed a must. With it comes trust. Without trust ...what do we have? :(

Missy