A Book of Love
Viewing comments for Chapter 19 "Keys"Assorted poems of love
37 total reviews
Comment from Dawn Munro
Wow, that list sure is growing! Yup, your notes are right on too - it's amazing to see the variety of interpretations. I just read Dejohnsrld's and highly recommend it - it is fabulous! But take heed, ye of soft heart - it reaches deeply and is so sad!
As for this one, I think we have that romantic soul so much in common! I just loved it, my friend!
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2016
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Wow, that list sure is growing! Yup, your notes are right on too - it's amazing to see the variety of interpretations. I just read Dejohnsrld's and highly recommend it - it is fabulous! But take heed, ye of soft heart - it reaches deeply and is so sad!
As for this one, I think we have that romantic soul so much in common! I just loved it, my friend!
Comment Written 04-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2016
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Oh girlie girl, I will dash off and read it now. Hugs...OOPs, thanks for giving this ol girl a great review.
Missy
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:) My pleasure.
Comment from Jay Squires
Thanks for sharing this part of you, Missy. I read your other entry to the contest Jax started, and I must say I like this one much better. The other is too predictable, but this is mellow and simple and direct. I heard a little echo of "Strumming me softly with your softly with your song, but not intrusively. You did a good job with this, Missy
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2016
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Thanks for sharing this part of you, Missy. I read your other entry to the contest Jax started, and I must say I like this one much better. The other is too predictable, but this is mellow and simple and direct. I heard a little echo of "Strumming me softly with your softly with your song, but not intrusively. You did a good job with this, Missy
Comment Written 04-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2016
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Thank you much, Jay. When done with replies I am off to finish your latest addition to Trinning.
Missy xx
Comment from Leineco
I love the way you use the piano as a jumping off point :-)
A symbol for the metaphorical music he wrote, that set your heart dancing :-)
Nicely done Missy :-)
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2016
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I love the way you use the piano as a jumping off point :-)
A symbol for the metaphorical music he wrote, that set your heart dancing :-)
Nicely done Missy :-)
Comment Written 04-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2016
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Thank you, I think they call what I do ...Ekphrastic poetry. It is poetry based on feelings inspired by a work of art. (or something like that :))
I am delighted that you enjoyed it.
Missy
Comment from TAB_that's me
I just realized that you wrote 2 poems for the picture:) I think I like this one a bit better but they are each unique. I hope all is well with you.
Teresa
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2016
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I just realized that you wrote 2 poems for the picture:) I think I like this one a bit better but they are each unique. I hope all is well with you.
Teresa
Comment Written 04-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2016
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I really hate to do this but because I am ill at the moment and have so many to reply to I am gonna copy and paste this generic and unsatisfactory reply to all my lovely reviews. Please forgive me.
Missy
Comment from Sankey
Hi mate, loved the poem. Had already read Jax Franklin's contribution to the Picture This group. I love this dear old piano picture. Having been a pianist and organist since very young. Sadly no more due to hearing problems. Happy New Year.
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2016
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Hi mate, loved the poem. Had already read Jax Franklin's contribution to the Picture This group. I love this dear old piano picture. Having been a pianist and organist since very young. Sadly no more due to hearing problems. Happy New Year.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2016
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I really hate to do this but because I am ill at the moment and have so many to reply to I am gonna copy and paste this generic and unsatisfactory reply to all my lovely reviews. Please forgive me.
Missy
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Get well soon.
Comment from Ric Myworld
Tickling the keys to my fancy, oh, no, I must have read that wrong. Tickling my little fanny is the key, oh, no, so sorry. I know that wasn't it and I apologize for the slip. But thanks for another fine poem that I'm sure you can tell has my mind working. Great job. :-)
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2016
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Tickling the keys to my fancy, oh, no, I must have read that wrong. Tickling my little fanny is the key, oh, no, so sorry. I know that wasn't it and I apologize for the slip. But thanks for another fine poem that I'm sure you can tell has my mind working. Great job. :-)
Comment Written 04-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2016
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I really hate to do this but because I am ill at the moment and have so many to reply to I am gonna copy and paste this generic and unsatisfactory reply to all my lovely reviews. Please forgive me.
Missy
Comment from Mark Valentine
As you say in your bio, your heart is evident in your writing. It certainly is in this piece - a nice take on the picture (and again, thanks for a wonderful choice of picture!) - to use music as a metaphor for romantic love - I like the way each of the three stanzas tapers down to a single, poignant word. Fantastic!
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2016
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As you say in your bio, your heart is evident in your writing. It certainly is in this piece - a nice take on the picture (and again, thanks for a wonderful choice of picture!) - to use music as a metaphor for romantic love - I like the way each of the three stanzas tapers down to a single, poignant word. Fantastic!
Comment Written 04-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2016
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I really hate to do this but because I am ill at the moment and have so many to reply to I am gonna copy and paste this generic and unsatisfactory reply to all my lovely reviews. Please forgive me.
Missy
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
I enjoyed your challenge poem. I like the comparison you made of the one you love and the 'music of life.' Your words flow well. Good job and thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2016
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I enjoyed your challenge poem. I like the comparison you made of the one you love and the 'music of life.' Your words flow well. Good job and thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 09-Jan-2016
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I really hate to do this but because I am ill at the moment and have so many to reply to I am gonna copy and paste this generic and unsatisfactory reply to all my lovely reviews. Please forgive me.
Missy
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That is ok. Hope you feel better fast.
Comment from Domino 2
Very sweet, simple (in the best way) and romantic words, Missy, IF were spoken about a special person.
I'm not sure it would be clear this would be the piano speaking, if not for the artwork, but that's irrelevant, as the challenge here IS to write about the artwork, and you personify the piano's gratitude and happiness very well. ;-)
Nice one.
Best wishes, Ray xx
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2016
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Very sweet, simple (in the best way) and romantic words, Missy, IF were spoken about a special person.
I'm not sure it would be clear this would be the piano speaking, if not for the artwork, but that's irrelevant, as the challenge here IS to write about the artwork, and you personify the piano's gratitude and happiness very well. ;-)
Nice one.
Best wishes, Ray xx
Comment Written 04-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2016
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Hi, Ray, thanks for the sweet review. I have given up finding someone with enough fire to match mine...lol. So, I just write from longing. Seems to work, most of the time. :)
Missy
Comment from LanceHill
Very nice. Placing love in comparison to "New music written on our hearts" is excellent. Both bring so much pleasure. Have a blessed week. God bless.
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2016
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Very nice. Placing love in comparison to "New music written on our hearts" is excellent. Both bring so much pleasure. Have a blessed week. God bless.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2016
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Lance, thank you for giving me a portion of your valuable time here. Your review has left me smiling :)
Always,
Missy