The Quest
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Comment from Mastery
Hello, my friend. You are doing a splendid job of relating this story, Ulla. Your writing is inspirational for any out there who are in search of a parent or parents. I think I told you I was raised in foster homes and orphanages until I was 17. I can relate in many ways;
""To be honest, it freaked me out. I can't say that I had forgotten about you, Ulla, but I had sort of put it all into a compartment that I didn't visit, but this brought it all back. I was shaken to the core." (Good solid writing)
Blesssings and Merry Christmas! X Bob
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2015
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Hello, my friend. You are doing a splendid job of relating this story, Ulla. Your writing is inspirational for any out there who are in search of a parent or parents. I think I told you I was raised in foster homes and orphanages until I was 17. I can relate in many ways;
""To be honest, it freaked me out. I can't say that I had forgotten about you, Ulla, but I had sort of put it all into a compartment that I didn't visit, but this brought it all back. I was shaken to the core." (Good solid writing)
Blesssings and Merry Christmas! X Bob
Comment Written 20-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2015
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Bob, this is such a lovely review and thanks for the lovely stars. You've made my day. I am so pleased that you find my writing worthy. A Merry Christmas to you and yours. Ulla
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:) Bob
Comment from Tomes Johnston
This is an interesting post that the author has created with this piece of writing. This is a sad story and luckily, I have never had to contend with any of this. This story is an eye-opener and it reminds me of the move 'Philomena'.
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2015
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This is an interesting post that the author has created with this piece of writing. This is a sad story and luckily, I have never had to contend with any of this. This story is an eye-opener and it reminds me of the move 'Philomena'.
Comment Written 20-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2015
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Hi Tomes, thank you so much for the review. More is to follow soon. All best.Ulla
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Take care.
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi, Ulla
= Oh, jeeze! What a cliffhanger you left!
= And she had just married.
= Oh, her mother didn't hold it back until after she married did she?
= That would be nasty business.
= Super chapter. (*<*)
* Merry Christmas to you and yours*
Cheers & Blessings...
Keep Smilin'... Jackie/Jax (*:*)
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2015
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Hi, Ulla
= Oh, jeeze! What a cliffhanger you left!
= And she had just married.
= Oh, her mother didn't hold it back until after she married did she?
= That would be nasty business.
= Super chapter. (*<*)
* Merry Christmas to you and yours*
Cheers & Blessings...
Keep Smilin'... Jackie/Jax (*:*)
Comment Written 20-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2015
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Thank you so much, Jax. As you so aptly say, it was nasty business. More is to follow soon. All best and Merry Christmas. Ulla
Comment from Giddy Nielsen-Sweep
Oh,My goodness, Ulla... what anxiety you must've felt! Your mother also at the time of the letter no doubt. this must have been such an emotional time for you, I'm sure. I can't wait for the next part. Giddy
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2015
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Oh,My goodness, Ulla... what anxiety you must've felt! Your mother also at the time of the letter no doubt. this must have been such an emotional time for you, I'm sure. I can't wait for the next part. Giddy
Comment Written 20-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2015
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Thank you so much Giddy, it was a surprise to say it mildly. Thank you so much for your continuing support. More to follow soon. All best, and Merry Christmas. Ulla
Comment from MelB
Another interesting chapter. Of course, I am very curious as to what the letter says. I will have to wait for the next post to find out.
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2015
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Another interesting chapter. Of course, I am very curious as to what the letter says. I will have to wait for the next post to find out.
Comment Written 20-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2015
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Mel, thank you so much for this. More to follow soon. All best.Ulla
Comment from seaglass
Wow, so maybe I was correct, she did hide the letters from your mother. That would be so mean. Guess I will find out with the next post. I'm glad you had a happy childhood with your adoptive parents, it doesn't work out that way for everyone.
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2015
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Wow, so maybe I was correct, she did hide the letters from your mother. That would be so mean. Guess I will find out with the next post. I'm glad you had a happy childhood with your adoptive parents, it doesn't work out that way for everyone.
Comment Written 20-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2015
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Hi there, yeah, you are not incorrect. You guessed it from early on. More to follow soon. All best, and Merry Christmas. Ulla
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I'll never understand how some individuals think they have a right to alter the destine of others but sadly it happens far too often.
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You are so right, I couldn't agree more, and I can assure you my mother would have agreed with you as well. All best Ulla
Comment from Curly Girly
So far this is proving to be a riveting read!
The end had me worried. Did your grandmother hide the American's love letters from your mother? I really want to know! I sure hope not, because that would be terrible. I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter.
Suggestions:
It was right under the surface, yet it stubbornly stayed underneath as if prevented from coming up and catch a breath.
It was right under the surface, yet it stayed stubbornly underneath as if prevented from coming up to breathe.
so better say nothing at this point..
so IT WAS better say nothing at this point.
I could easily have denied to do it,
I could easily have REFUSED to do it,
so who was I to suddenly deny you that opportunity,
so who was I to suddenly deny you that opportunity[?]
Nicole
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2015
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So far this is proving to be a riveting read!
The end had me worried. Did your grandmother hide the American's love letters from your mother? I really want to know! I sure hope not, because that would be terrible. I'm looking forward to reading the next chapter.
Suggestions:
It was right under the surface, yet it stubbornly stayed underneath as if prevented from coming up and catch a breath.
It was right under the surface, yet it stayed stubbornly underneath as if prevented from coming up to breathe.
so better say nothing at this point..
so IT WAS better say nothing at this point.
I could easily have denied to do it,
I could easily have REFUSED to do it,
so who was I to suddenly deny you that opportunity,
so who was I to suddenly deny you that opportunity[?]
Nicole
Comment Written 20-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2015
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Nicole , thank you so much and for all your support. I am so pleased. All best, and Merry Christmas. Ulla
Comment from a.w.brooks
A great story I was involved the whole time reading it. I didn't see anything that I would change very well written thanks for the read and happy writing
A.W.BROOKS
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2015
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A great story I was involved the whole time reading it. I didn't see anything that I would change very well written thanks for the read and happy writing
A.W.BROOKS
Comment Written 19-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2015
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Thank you so much. If you're interested more is to follow soon. All best.Ulla
Comment from chasennov
Finding My Roots "The Quest Part Sixteen" This is a very good part in your book about finding your roots. A great story so far and of course I'm wondering what is in that letter. Very well done.
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2015
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Finding My Roots "The Quest Part Sixteen" This is a very good part in your book about finding your roots. A great story so far and of course I'm wondering what is in that letter. Very well done.
Comment Written 19-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2015
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Thank you so much and for following. More is to come soon. All best. Ulla
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You are most welcome.
Comment from Marvin Calloway
Ulla
The Quest_Part Sixteen
Wow. What a way to end a part.
You tell the story so clearly and explicitly. I look forward to the continuation. It's very interesting. 6*
Marv
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2015
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Ulla
The Quest_Part Sixteen
Wow. What a way to end a part.
You tell the story so clearly and explicitly. I look forward to the continuation. It's very interesting. 6*
Marv
Comment Written 19-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2015
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Marvin, thank you so much. And the six. It made my day. I am so pleased that you like it. All best.Ulla