2015 Haiku
Viewing comments for Chapter 32 "5/7/5 (putrid cadaver)"A collection of haiku I wrote in 2015
47 total reviews
Comment from Gloria ....
Oh man, I'd recognize that blood stain anywhere. Even though zombies ain't my favourite type of monster, they do take a pretty good picture, especially when they post in front of a full moon.
Very fun 5/7/5. I wish you all the best in the contest.
Gloria
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2015
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Oh man, I'd recognize that blood stain anywhere. Even though zombies ain't my favourite type of monster, they do take a pretty good picture, especially when they post in front of a full moon.
Very fun 5/7/5. I wish you all the best in the contest.
Gloria
Comment Written 18-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2015
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Thank you very much for the excellet review. :)
Comment from wordspinner314
Great 5-7-5 horror poem! The artwork is also incredible! I love the wording used to describe zombies. Everything here is masterfully executed. Bravo!
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2015
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Great 5-7-5 horror poem! The artwork is also incredible! I love the wording used to describe zombies. Everything here is masterfully executed. Bravo!
Comment Written 18-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2015
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Thank you so much wordspinner, you are very kind. :)
Comment from Dawn Munro
YECH! If this isn't the most disgusting little 5-7-5 poem ever! YIKES! Spare me from horrid zombies. What a FABULOUS entry for this prompt, in every respect! You've even managed alliteration with the use of those powerful word choices. And do I need to mention the stunning presentation? If this isn't a winner, I don't know why not!!! No sixes left this week, unfortunately - sorry. Good luck!
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reply by the author on 18-Nov-2015
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YECH! If this isn't the most disgusting little 5-7-5 poem ever! YIKES! Spare me from horrid zombies. What a FABULOUS entry for this prompt, in every respect! You've even managed alliteration with the use of those powerful word choices. And do I need to mention the stunning presentation? If this isn't a winner, I don't know why not!!! No sixes left this week, unfortunately - sorry. Good luck!
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Comment Written 18-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2015
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Thank you very much Dawn, I appreciate your excellent review very much.
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You are very welcome - sorry no sixes, even though I usually don't use a six on a short work because I follow much longer things, like book chapters and so on. It deserves an exceptional rating!
Comment from I am Cat
Ewwww you! ;)
This is Groooossssssss... LOL
I guess you KILLED it! ;)
well done, and wow... good luck in this contest...
I'm just blown away by this... it's really yuk. LOL
Good luck, I think you'll do well
Cat
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2015
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Ewwww you! ;)
This is Groooossssssss... LOL
I guess you KILLED it! ;)
well done, and wow... good luck in this contest...
I'm just blown away by this... it's really yuk. LOL
Good luck, I think you'll do well
Cat
Comment Written 18-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 18-Nov-2015
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LOL Did I gross you out ? LOL Sorry Sister Cat. I can't help it. I love zombies and they love me. :) Thank you very much for the great review and feedback. Now I know how to get you. :)
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Naw, I loved it. LOLOL No worries. ;) Mwah!
Comment from OnyxSapphire78
Nice job in the 5-7-5 horror style! The imagery is powerful and with this style that can be difficult. Thank you for sharing. Good luck in the contest! Happy writing!
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2015
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Nice job in the 5-7-5 horror style! The imagery is powerful and with this style that can be difficult. Thank you for sharing. Good luck in the contest! Happy writing!
Comment Written 17-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2015
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Thank you very much for the excellent review and feedback :)
Comment from sherrygreywolf
I love the zombie theme and the artwork you chose to use. Poem is nicely worded and there are no errors in spelling or syllable count. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2015
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I love the zombie theme and the artwork you chose to use. Poem is nicely worded and there are no errors in spelling or syllable count. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 17-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2015
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Thank you very much for the excellent review and feedback :)
Comment from Chuck23
I like that you changed the text to red for the word "rare." I read this and could immediately hear actors from "Night of the living dead" in my head. I thought it was a perfect portrayal of zombies, and a very good entry for the contest! I gave you a six because it was very visual, even had there been no images.
Good luck!
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2015
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I like that you changed the text to red for the word "rare." I read this and could immediately hear actors from "Night of the living dead" in my head. I thought it was a perfect portrayal of zombies, and a very good entry for the contest! I gave you a six because it was very visual, even had there been no images.
Good luck!
Comment Written 17-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2015
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Thank you so much Chuck, what an awesome review and six stars! I really appreciate it. With the word 'rare', I was thinking rare meat. :) but you probably got that.
Comment from Zue65
Again, i will sound like a broken record here, but I have to be honest that I am not really into the horror genre. This 5-7-5 poem however holds the attention of the readers because it packs a lot in so few words. An excellent write. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2015
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Again, i will sound like a broken record here, but I have to be honest that I am not really into the horror genre. This 5-7-5 poem however holds the attention of the readers because it packs a lot in so few words. An excellent write. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 17-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2015
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Thank you so much nassus, I really appreciate your review and great feedback. :)
Comment from alvina224224
a great entry for this contest, author. The world had a terrible time combatting ebola earlier, and from the description of its effects described, there cannot be much any more horrible. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2015
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a great entry for this contest, author. The world had a terrible time combatting ebola earlier, and from the description of its effects described, there cannot be much any more horrible. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 17-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2015
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Thank you very much Alvina, I appreciate your review. :)
Comment from mfowler
This is decidedly horrible which is what I suspect it's meant to be. A virus the cause, the left overs described as a 'soulless bag of bones' and it's vessel 'a putrid cadaver'. Word choices, alliteration and great graphics give this piece a real edge. Best of luck with the voters who no doubt will be using skeletal fingers to press the voting button.
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2015
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This is decidedly horrible which is what I suspect it's meant to be. A virus the cause, the left overs described as a 'soulless bag of bones' and it's vessel 'a putrid cadaver'. Word choices, alliteration and great graphics give this piece a real edge. Best of luck with the voters who no doubt will be using skeletal fingers to press the voting button.
Comment Written 17-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2015
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Thank you very much for the excellent review. :)