Comment from PoemsOfDD

Excellent

This is a sound acrostic poetry contest entry. You have chosen a word - Awareness - and described it in an enlightening and rhyming manner. It is also nicely presented. Well done and good luck in the competition.

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 05-Nov-2015

Thanks for the excellent review, I appreciate it and also your good luck wishes Mary

Comment from gamay

Excellent

Hello Jakarrie.
This very nice acrostic poem.
My first time I put in fanstory is acrostic.
And I found its good.
Good luck my friend.
gamay

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 05-Nov-2015

I am so pleased you enjoyed my Acrostic I appreciate your excellent review. Mary

Comment from AnnaLinda

Excellent

Jackarrie,

I think you have composed an outstanding acrostic entry
with "Awareness" The images and message you have
conveyed within it are both spiritual and uplifting. You
did a wonderful job rhyming all the lines which read
so smoothly.

"Always connected to the insights of the higher power
Revelling in the magic of a perfect bloomed flower"

Beautifully said...Your painting is also very nice,

Linda

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 05-Nov-2015

Thank you so much Linda (SweetLinda) for your kind remarks and a most encouraging review. I am pleased you like my painting.
the Donkeys they are being celebrated because they worked for the common people down the years. In France, they march the animals through the town. The year before it was the bulls.
Mary

Comment from CobiDawn

Excellent

This is quite impressive with beautiful wording, rhyme, tone, and meter. We dance with our heart, our emotions melt. Lovely words.

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 05-Nov-2015

Thanks for the excellent review and your very kind comments. Mary

reply by CobiDawn on 05-Nov-2015

You're welcome

Comment from Brett Matthew West

Excellent

Well written poem depicts as we travel through life we never cease being both the pupil and the teacher. Uses such terms as "we dance with our hearts," and "the wisdom of nature," to better illustrate this theme. Should also be a good contest entry.

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 Comment Written 05-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 05-Nov-2015

Thanks Brett for your great comments in your review. Mary

Comment from Domino 2

Excellent

Excellent acrostic, Mary, that hints at a spiritual well-being and future, rather than religious afterlife.

Top examples of how to enjoy nature and life - thus creating a more contented 'here and now'.

Good luck and best wishes, Ray xx



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 Comment Written 05-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 05-Nov-2015

Thanks Ray I appreciate that. Mary