Comment from RPSaxena

Exceptional

Hello Friend,
Nice piece of poetry meeting all the desired norms and beautifully depicting its theme!
Simple as well as impressive wording.
Smooth and captivating flow throughout the poem with lively imagery.
Picture enhances beauty of the poem.
Best of Luck!

 Comment Written 19-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 19-Sep-2015

Thank you very much rpsaxena I really appreciate the six stars and exceptional review. :)

Comment from ExperiencingLiphe

Excellent

I could sit and watch a moon over the water any time. That goes along with watching it snow, rain or even a fire. I could watch all of those things for hours and not even care about time. Great job friend

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 18-Sep-2015

Thank you :)

Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

There are many different serious aspect in the relationship with the moon and earth, Some have yet to be discovered by scientists. Good luck in your contest.

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 18-Sep-2015

Thank you :)

reply by c_lucas on 21-Sep-2015

You're welcome, Gypsy Blue Rose. Charlie

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

This is an enjoyable 5-7-5 giving a little smile with the clever pun in the third line, "makes funny phases." Presentation is striking and interesting.

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 18-Sep-2015

Thank you :)

Comment from fastdigits

Excellent

Seventeen syllables that enhance the
beautiful art work that you have chosen
and make one appreciate the beauty of moonlight
as it reflects on the water.
Well done and good luck

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 18-Sep-2015

thank you :)

Comment from angel123

Excellent

Your poem flows well and your message is meaningful. Your artwork choice goes well with your words and it enhances your poem.

Angel123

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 18-Sep-2015

thank you Angel :)

Comment from Jacob Collins

Excellent

You described the moonlight, particularly it's shine upon the sea perfectly. I liked the imagery you used in your piece, I thought that your writing was well written and flowed well. I couldn't fault it. Good luck in the contest...Jacob

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 18-Sep-2015

thank you Jacob :)

Comment from Gert sherwood

Excellent

Hello author what you said in 17 syllables is so colorful with the streams of funny phases is an very original way of describing the motion
of the streams of moonlight reflecting on blue waters

Gert

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 18-Sep-2015

thank you Gert :)

Comment from Pantygynt

Excellent

This fits the syllabic reqyirements of the contest. But I am at a loss to understand the third line. Is this supposed to be a satori, making us take a look at the previous from a different angle, or are we mere to indulge in the delights of the alliteration?

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 18-Sep-2015

thank you Angel :) This is a haikuish 5/7/5.... the 3rd line is a satori line. I used phases, as in the moon's phases, and used it as faces... like making funny faces... just something fun to think about.

Comment from Jeanie Mercer

Excellent

This is nicely written and well presented. Form and syllable counts are correct according to the rules of the contest, Good luck to you, Jeanie Mercer

 Comment Written 18-Sep-2015

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reply by the author on 18-Sep-2015

Thank you Jeanie, I need good luck, I am one vote less than the leading entry :/ Thank you very much for the review :)
~gypsy