2015 Haiku
Viewing comments for Chapter 41 "1/6/1 (Blue)"A collection of haiku I wrote in 2015
55 total reviews
Comment from 4hisglory
Wow, that blue really stands out, and a nice touch with the moving water in the picture. Very creative set-up.
I like that the three lines rhyme. I'm not crazy about the color blue, but this is really nice. Blessings, LaVonne
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2015
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Wow, that blue really stands out, and a nice touch with the moving water in the picture. Very creative set-up.
I like that the three lines rhyme. I'm not crazy about the color blue, but this is really nice. Blessings, LaVonne
Comment Written 04-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2015
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Thank you :)
Comment from Artistic Arty
Well this short little piece is certainly easy to like, for I do love blue as well. The color has a deep majestic mystery to it, along with many other things. The last line has a playful yet powerful quality to it, for it is a declaration.
A fun and enjoyable poem.
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2015
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Well this short little piece is certainly easy to like, for I do love blue as well. The color has a deep majestic mystery to it, along with many other things. The last line has a playful yet powerful quality to it, for it is a declaration.
A fun and enjoyable poem.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2015
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Thank you :)
Comment from harleyangelbrat
You did a great job on this contest entry. It's expressive in just a few words which makes for a great read. I really enjoyed reading this very much. It is an excellent read. God bless you!
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2015
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You did a great job on this contest entry. It's expressive in just a few words which makes for a great read. I really enjoyed reading this very much. It is an excellent read. God bless you!
Comment Written 04-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2015
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Thank you :)
Comment from Ridley Williams
Hello, Poet,
You make a beautiful statement with such a small amount to work with...nice!
But, that picture...Wow! It compliments the poem wonderfully and appeals to the senses.
Best of luck with your splendid entry,
Bill
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2015
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Hello, Poet,
You make a beautiful statement with such a small amount to work with...nice!
But, that picture...Wow! It compliments the poem wonderfully and appeals to the senses.
Best of luck with your splendid entry,
Bill
Comment Written 04-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2015
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Thank you Bill :)
Comment from Domino 2
Stunning presentation and artwork, mystery writer.
I've never much liked the word, 'hue' - no idea why, and I guess I'm just one of a weird minority. :-)
Anyway, it certainly fits perfectly with the rhymes, and the atmosphere created here.
Nice one. Good luck and best wishes, Ray.
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2015
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Stunning presentation and artwork, mystery writer.
I've never much liked the word, 'hue' - no idea why, and I guess I'm just one of a weird minority. :-)
Anyway, it certainly fits perfectly with the rhymes, and the atmosphere created here.
Nice one. Good luck and best wishes, Ray.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2015
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Thank you :)
Comment from lightink
It might be a blank entry but I think I know who you are :)! These are simple but lovely words praising you favorite color. Pleasant read! Thank you for sharing!
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2015
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It might be a blank entry but I think I know who you are :)! These are simple but lovely words praising you favorite color. Pleasant read! Thank you for sharing!
Comment Written 04-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2015
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Thank you :) I guess I am pretty easy to guess :)
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Well, you didn't hide it too well ;D
Comment from Neonewman
Love reading these challenging pieces! You crafted this one with ease it seems. I do love the Hue of Blue myself! This should be a strong contender. Good luck in the contest.
God bless!
Steve
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2015
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Love reading these challenging pieces! You crafted this one with ease it seems. I do love the Hue of Blue myself! This should be a strong contender. Good luck in the contest.
God bless!
Steve
Comment Written 04-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2015
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Thank you :)
Comment from Glasstruth
The rhyming sounds very natural and no awkwardness at all. The second line is what really makes this poem work. Well crafted. Les
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2015
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The rhyming sounds very natural and no awkwardness at all. The second line is what really makes this poem work. Well crafted. Les
Comment Written 04-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2015
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Thank you Les :)
Comment from Serendipity!
Short, sweet and complete. That is a very vivid shade of blue you displayed. Do you have many profound thoughts when you gaze at the color blue, is it the color of your favorite shirt, your pick up, something down memories' lane? I hope you do well.
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2015
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Short, sweet and complete. That is a very vivid shade of blue you displayed. Do you have many profound thoughts when you gaze at the color blue, is it the color of your favorite shirt, your pick up, something down memories' lane? I hope you do well.
Comment Written 04-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2015
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I have a blue rose and a blue moon tattoos on my back Thank you for the excellent review :)
Comment from l.raven
this reminds me of Gungalo...she was a brilliant wrier on this site that passed away...her favorite color was blue...and she was always writing about it...very nicely written...and a stunning picture...luff Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2015
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this reminds me of Gungalo...she was a brilliant wrier on this site that passed away...her favorite color was blue...and she was always writing about it...very nicely written...and a stunning picture...luff Linda xxoo
Comment Written 04-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 04-Sep-2015
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Thank you for the excellent review :)
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you are so very welcome...xxoo luff