A Book of Love
Viewing comments for Chapter 29 "I Am Your Canvas"Assorted poems of love
76 total reviews
Comment from Jackarrie
I love your very artistic poem to be the canvas of your love is a very imaginative description of how you you want to see yourself in your relationship.
The painting is fabulous.
Well done
Mary
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2015
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I love your very artistic poem to be the canvas of your love is a very imaginative description of how you you want to see yourself in your relationship.
The painting is fabulous.
Well done
Mary
Comment Written 07-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2015
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Mary, thank you so much for the lovely review. I love the painting. It's what inspired me :)
Always,
Missy
Comment from TAB_that's me
Lovely art and poem. Did you do the artwork or was just inspired to write from it? You should join the group of us who will be writing from artwork just for fun once a month. Our next challenge is next month. If you are interested pm me with your email address and I will send you artwork chosen by padumachitta.
The small type font especially in purple is hard for my eyes to read but the poem was lovely.
Teresa
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2015
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Lovely art and poem. Did you do the artwork or was just inspired to write from it? You should join the group of us who will be writing from artwork just for fun once a month. Our next challenge is next month. If you are interested pm me with your email address and I will send you artwork chosen by padumachitta.
The small type font especially in purple is hard for my eyes to read but the poem was lovely.
Teresa
Comment Written 07-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2015
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Oh Teresa, I would love that :) It was from the artwork I was sent on Facebook. Thank you hon, for the review and I will send my email now. I tried to the point of throwing something to get the font bigger and keep the shape, so I finally settled, sorry!
Missy
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A beautiful interpretation of a wonderful piece of art. Its colorful in vision as well as in your poem. The two works compliment each other completely
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2015
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A beautiful interpretation of a wonderful piece of art. Its colorful in vision as well as in your poem. The two works compliment each other completely
Comment Written 07-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2015
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Ms. Sandra, I thank you for this beautiful look you have given to my work. Your words mean a lot to me :)
Always,
Missy
Comment from TPAC
A very imaginative soul profound write illustrating poetic descriptive structuring in lines captivating in its composition. Delightful read.
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2015
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A very imaginative soul profound write illustrating poetic descriptive structuring in lines captivating in its composition. Delightful read.
Comment Written 07-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2015
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Blessings to you TPAC, for this delightful review :)
Missy
Comment from Eric1
Hi Melissa, what a wonderful poem, an absolute cornucopia of emotions and thoughts, all well presented in a beautiful style, Thank you for sharing my friend.
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2015
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Hi Melissa, what a wonderful poem, an absolute cornucopia of emotions and thoughts, all well presented in a beautiful style, Thank you for sharing my friend.
Comment Written 07-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2015
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HI right back atcha Eric :)
Thank you, for this lovely review my friend.
Missy
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You are very welcome my friend.
Comment from Naxsc
A very passionately expressed poem. Somehow the thought of using one's body as canvas and painting on it leads me to have erotic thoughts.
Though your poem only talks about the passion to protect and love, I had different thoughts through out, I must confess. A very stunningly vivid image floats through my mind and I want to play with my lover making his body be a canvas and what not (evil grin ^_^)
Kudos to the writing!
All the best!
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2015
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A very passionately expressed poem. Somehow the thought of using one's body as canvas and painting on it leads me to have erotic thoughts.
Though your poem only talks about the passion to protect and love, I had different thoughts through out, I must confess. A very stunningly vivid image floats through my mind and I want to play with my lover making his body be a canvas and what not (evil grin ^_^)
Kudos to the writing!
All the best!
Comment Written 07-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2015
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Erotic is good...lol I am pleased you found and enjoyed this lil work of mine....
Put it to good use...hahahaha!!!
Thanks hon :)
Always,
Missy
Comment from rjuselius
this is such a passionate poem, it jumps off the page! the imagery is full of lust and love, the waking up of the body. slwoly enticing the other one to a embrace.
nice one dear friend!
thank you for sharing!
blessings!
rebekka x
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2015
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this is such a passionate poem, it jumps off the page! the imagery is full of lust and love, the waking up of the body. slwoly enticing the other one to a embrace.
nice one dear friend!
thank you for sharing!
blessings!
rebekka x
Comment Written 07-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2015
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Hiya Bekka, thanks sug for the splendid review...I really appreciate it :)
Always,
Missy
Comment from NJK62
I really enjoyed this exuberant poem. I admire poets who tackle the big subjects and do so in such an original way. I thought the use of the extended metaphor was highly effective and each development of that metaphor was appropriately achieved - e.g. black lines to convey boundaries that keep you safe, red capturing his passion to colour your lips etc. I also like the repeated use of interrogatives to capture the urgency of the feelings, which is strengthened further by the decision to mark the end of sentences with commas. The last line is a masterstroke: the words 'radiant' implies both the vibrant colours of the painted canvas and happiness of the writer, ideas that are given further emphasis by the use of line division. The only words and phrases that don't work for me is 'hue' and 'residing therein': the former is a rather old-fashioned word that for me conflicts with the contemporary feel of the poem, and the latter phrase sounds rather legalistic and formal for such an intimate poem. Nevertheless, neither detract from the poem's overall success. Thanks for sharing it with us!!!
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2015
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I really enjoyed this exuberant poem. I admire poets who tackle the big subjects and do so in such an original way. I thought the use of the extended metaphor was highly effective and each development of that metaphor was appropriately achieved - e.g. black lines to convey boundaries that keep you safe, red capturing his passion to colour your lips etc. I also like the repeated use of interrogatives to capture the urgency of the feelings, which is strengthened further by the decision to mark the end of sentences with commas. The last line is a masterstroke: the words 'radiant' implies both the vibrant colours of the painted canvas and happiness of the writer, ideas that are given further emphasis by the use of line division. The only words and phrases that don't work for me is 'hue' and 'residing therein': the former is a rather old-fashioned word that for me conflicts with the contemporary feel of the poem, and the latter phrase sounds rather legalistic and formal for such an intimate poem. Nevertheless, neither detract from the poem's overall success. Thanks for sharing it with us!!!
Comment Written 07-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2015
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Before writing this reply, I went to your page to see the caliber of the writer that had given me this lovely and touching review. There I found THE AFFAIR...simply stunning! I will go back and leave a review after this :)
Thank you from the bottom of my heart for this time-consuming review you left for me. I appreciate every word. I realize the 2 words you have a problem with are as you describe but, I am old-fashioned in some things myself. As a whole, I am just delighted that you thought enough about my work to leave this. :)
Smiling
Always,
Missy
Comment from Walu Feral
G'day Missy. Wow! What a creation this is. The picture, the layout and form are quite spectacular. Then we have the content! Cikey, that is simply superbly mind blowing and mouth watering poetry. I wanted more but sadly it had to end somewhere. Sheer brilliance, congratulations mate. Cheers Fez
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2015
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G'day Missy. Wow! What a creation this is. The picture, the layout and form are quite spectacular. Then we have the content! Cikey, that is simply superbly mind blowing and mouth watering poetry. I wanted more but sadly it had to end somewhere. Sheer brilliance, congratulations mate. Cheers Fez
Comment Written 07-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2015
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Blushing from head to toe, Fez. Thanks from this ol southern girl!!!! You make me feel like I am doing something so right:)
I hope you are doing well and will soon be reunited with the lovely Delia and the lil princess.
Always,
Missy
Comment from beizanten
Very Sweet and romantic, and very original
Love the used of color, beating heart and scent in this to show love. Keep up the good work!
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2015
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Very Sweet and romantic, and very original
Love the used of color, beating heart and scent in this to show love. Keep up the good work!
Comment Written 07-Sep-2015
reply by the author on 07-Sep-2015
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Beizanten, I want to thank you, sincerely for this lovely review of my work.
Blessings to you :)
Always,
Missy