Comment from TAB_that's me

Excellent

This two are certainly opposites. Well written. Each one describes perfectly in the correct syllabic form. Good luck in the contest.
teresa

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 Comment Written 26-Aug-2015

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reply by the author on 26-Aug-2015

Thank you Teresa :)

Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin

Excellent

Hi...

_ Absolute truth in this.
_ Having been on the very bottom, as well as the top, our frame of mind, indeed, dictates everything we do, think, feel---how we react or don't. It all ties in together.
_ Excellent choice of verbiage for this Sedoko, and a wonderful entry. Good luck in the contest.
_ I do believe I recognize this style as well---maybe not.
_ Hope all is well---take care.

Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'.... Jax (*;*)

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 Comment Written 26-Aug-2015

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reply by the author on 26-Aug-2015

LOL yes, it is probably easy to tell who I am, but maybe not. Thank you so much for this fine review. :)