Teasing You So Tenderly
Some loving by the fireplace30 total reviews
Comment from misscookie
I love the artwork you choose for your poem
It is perfect match.
You captured my attention from the first line to the last.
Each word you wrote I can sense the love and compassion.
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie
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reply by the author on 23-Jul-2015
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I love the artwork you choose for your poem
It is perfect match.
You captured my attention from the first line to the last.
Each word you wrote I can sense the love and compassion.
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie
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Comment Written 21-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2015
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Thank you so much Cookie for your kind words Hope you enjoy the next one I write as well
TK
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I'm sure I will, if not nicely I will let you know why. which I don't think would happen. LOL
Cookie
Comment from w.j.debi
Oh my, I think I forgot to breathe. I hope you and your love had a wonderful night by the fire. It sounds so romantic. Usually, I have sixes left until the end of the week. I regret I don't have one left right now to give your wonderful verse. It is certainly deserving. Wow! This just sizzles, TK.
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2015
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Oh my, I think I forgot to breathe. I hope you and your love had a wonderful night by the fire. It sounds so romantic. Usually, I have sixes left until the end of the week. I regret I don't have one left right now to give your wonderful verse. It is certainly deserving. Wow! This just sizzles, TK.
Comment Written 20-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2015
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Well thank you so much Lady D. I hope you caught your breath and now are ready to read my next romantic interlude lol You virtual 6 is as good as any green one I could have received
HUGS
TK
Comment from Sasha
What a delightful and romantic poem. You are clearly in love and I so happy for you. This is a marvelous poem and I enjoyed it very much.
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2015
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What a delightful and romantic poem. You are clearly in love and I so happy for you. This is a marvelous poem and I enjoyed it very much.
Comment Written 20-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2015
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Thank you much SG for such a nice comment on this I hope the next one penned you will equally enjoy
TK
Comment from TAB_that's me
Nothing wrong TK with a little passion and romance:) Well written and in good rhyming form. Keep up the writing (and the romancing).
teresa
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2015
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Nothing wrong TK with a little passion and romance:) Well written and in good rhyming form. Keep up the writing (and the romancing).
teresa
Comment Written 20-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2015
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Thank you so much Lady Teresa for the kind words and encouragement Hope my next little romantic interlude written you will enjoy as well
tk
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
You are so right.
Nicely penned. So romantic and very descriptive.
Loved the actions and the circumstances.
"fuel the fire's flame" nice
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2015
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You are so right.
Nicely penned. So romantic and very descriptive.
Loved the actions and the circumstances.
"fuel the fire's flame" nice
Comment Written 20-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2015
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Thank you so very much Barb for the kind words I hope my next write you wil equally enjoy as well
TK
Comment from BeasPeas
Your poem is passionate and romantic, straightforward--my kind of poetry. It's not cushioned in a lot of words that mean nothing. Extremely well done. Marilyn
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2015
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Your poem is passionate and romantic, straightforward--my kind of poetry. It's not cushioned in a lot of words that mean nothing. Extremely well done. Marilyn
Comment Written 20-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2015
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Thank you so much Lady Marilyn... Sometime to many words just get in the way especially in romance..Just a single touch done in silence can make the passion flow better than any word one can write...
TK
Comment from Megalips
Hey TK! Wow, I really like this one..."heat of passion...impossible to tame"...very nice, my noble knight! Do you have a fire place in Hawaii? No matter, just curious. Very passionate poem and your rhyme works well..."loving you real slow"...that's the way to do it, TK! HOT!
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2015
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Hey TK! Wow, I really like this one..."heat of passion...impossible to tame"...very nice, my noble knight! Do you have a fire place in Hawaii? No matter, just curious. Very passionate poem and your rhyme works well..."loving you real slow"...that's the way to do it, TK! HOT!
Comment Written 20-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2015
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Ha Some like it hot !!! Glad you do ML lol Believe it or not there are many homes with fireplaces here..We live at 2,000 ft and it does not call for any heat or air conditioning either..But many live 3,000+ ft up and yes it does get cold at night So a fireplace is a delight Hehehe look I made a rhyme
TK
Comment from lightink
Lovely! This is a PG13 sensual poetry! The voice that most woman would love to hear and believe but it's so hard (and dangerous) to trust. This guy seems to promise a lot (I'll change for you/no more drifting), yet I can't fully believe him! Too smooth talking, too many of the right words, tender but self-centered. Oh what a difference between "you're what I am longing for. " (full stop) and "You're what I am longing for on this (...) rainy night". Also, I am wondering is the irregular number of syllables is an intentional tool to portray his personality. I found myself longing for some personal depth about him or more signs that he is attuning to her. Interesting piece! Thank you for sharing.
Oh, and there's a typo in the last stanza (fires/fire's)
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2015
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Lovely! This is a PG13 sensual poetry! The voice that most woman would love to hear and believe but it's so hard (and dangerous) to trust. This guy seems to promise a lot (I'll change for you/no more drifting), yet I can't fully believe him! Too smooth talking, too many of the right words, tender but self-centered. Oh what a difference between "you're what I am longing for. " (full stop) and "You're what I am longing for on this (...) rainy night". Also, I am wondering is the irregular number of syllables is an intentional tool to portray his personality. I found myself longing for some personal depth about him or more signs that he is attuning to her. Interesting piece! Thank you for sharing.
Oh, and there's a typo in the last stanza (fires/fire's)
Comment Written 20-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2015
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Ah thank you for catching that fire to fire's light link ...Go to my portfolio and you will get a much in depth as to who this mystery man just might be..Thank you for reading and your more than excellent comments
TK
Comment from justafan
Your a fire unto yourself TK .. No one who came into your embrace would have to worry of being cold or lonely... This lil diddy as you call it.... Is perfect for stirring those fires of passion we all desire. Love it! ð???
Always,
LM
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2015
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Your a fire unto yourself TK .. No one who came into your embrace would have to worry of being cold or lonely... This lil diddy as you call it.... Is perfect for stirring those fires of passion we all desire. Love it! ð???
Always,
LM
Comment Written 20-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2015
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Geeze I thought I answered this long ago so sorry my dear Well you can stir those fire as well very wel indeed Glad you liked this and thank you so much for the, like you, lovely 6
Hugs
tk
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi, TK...
_ Yeah, smooth-talker!
_ Whisper, 'I love you,' a lot of bowchickawowwow, and then 'later, little chickie, a bird's gotta fly!'
_ LOL... I couldn't resist.
_ You know, my friend, ornery begets ornery.
_ Kidding aside, you penned and presented this very well.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Lady J (*:*)
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reply by the author on 23-Jul-2015
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Hi, TK...
_ Yeah, smooth-talker!
_ Whisper, 'I love you,' a lot of bowchickawowwow, and then 'later, little chickie, a bird's gotta fly!'
_ LOL... I couldn't resist.
_ You know, my friend, ornery begets ornery.
_ Kidding aside, you penned and presented this very well.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Lady J (*:*)
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Comment Written 20-Jul-2015
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2015
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Lady J you always make me smile and I like that ..Thank you so much for your hummm interesting review hehehe As they say birds of feather stick together What ever the hell that means
TK