Anxiety
Unnecessary rush.56 total reviews
Comment from petalangela
Well done I do not have the deserved six star sorry,
Anxiety the art of creating stress when there is none because with stress we would have nothing. Just a huge vacant area in our life. Stress we are doing something says our brain. No sure what but we are doing something !
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2015
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Well done I do not have the deserved six star sorry,
Anxiety the art of creating stress when there is none because with stress we would have nothing. Just a huge vacant area in our life. Stress we are doing something says our brain. No sure what but we are doing something !
Comment Written 16-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2015
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I appreciate you stopping by to read and comment on this poem. livelylinda
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
I enjoyed reading your poem. Good rhythm and even flow. Excellent word choice to enhance the theme. Nicely done and I thank you for sharing.
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I enjoyed reading your poem. Good rhythm and even flow. Excellent word choice to enhance the theme. Nicely done and I thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 16-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2015
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I appreciate you stopping by to read this poem and comment. livelylinda
Comment from c_lucas
Death is waiting at the end of one's life. This is the time to make your mark and to be all you can be. Your poem is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.
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Death is waiting at the end of one's life. This is the time to make your mark and to be all you can be. Your poem is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.
Comment Written 16-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2015
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Thank you, c! Linda
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You're welcome, Linda. Charlie
Comment from CMac2
Had to have a giggle about the cat. This poem however is really quite sad as so many people live this was day in and day out. Love the format and the simpleness to an important message.
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Had to have a giggle about the cat. This poem however is really quite sad as so many people live this was day in and day out. Love the format and the simpleness to an important message.
Comment Written 16-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2015
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That's me, simple! Thanks for reading and commenting. livelylinda
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi, Linda...
_ Indeed! Hurry and scurry and get nowhere.
_ I figure that out at my age, so the heck with it. I get to it when I can---if I can.
_ Fun poem.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*:*)
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2015
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Hi, Linda...
_ Indeed! Hurry and scurry and get nowhere.
_ I figure that out at my age, so the heck with it. I get to it when I can---if I can.
_ Fun poem.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*:*)
Comment Written 16-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2015
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The anxiety is in my brain and my body never hurries or scurries and never catches up! Thank you for reading, understanding. Linda
Comment from Eric1
Hi Linda, this poem shows the true nature of what is wrong with our world today, everyone seems to be in too much of a rush! Your free verse poem covers this wonderfully my friend, thank you for sharing.
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Hi Linda, this poem shows the true nature of what is wrong with our world today, everyone seems to be in too much of a rush! Your free verse poem covers this wonderfully my friend, thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 16-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2015
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Thank you so much, Eric1! Linda
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You are very welcome my friend.
Comment from Linda Kay
Nice job showing the sense of urgency all of these random thoughts give as they blurt in and our of your head. This poem fits my daughter to a tee.
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Nice job showing the sense of urgency all of these random thoughts give as they blurt in and our of your head. This poem fits my daughter to a tee.
Comment Written 16-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2015
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Thank you for reading, Linda Kay. livelylinda
Comment from JourneyHolm
Well written and spoken. The hustle is truly for naught if one doesn't take the time to appreciate the moment each deed is done in. I enjoyed this. Thank you for sharing.
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Well written and spoken. The hustle is truly for naught if one doesn't take the time to appreciate the moment each deed is done in. I enjoyed this. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 16-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2015
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Thank you for reading. livelylinda
Comment from Janet7053
I have no sixes left for great is the talent on FanStory. If I did you would receive one. You touch my heart with pity and sorrow when I read these particular lines:
uninvited unprompted unfed
drapes itself tightly around
clinging like Saran Wrap
tightening pressure to every last nerve
My observation is that the depth of the poem is watered down, diminished by the size and frivolity of the image selected.
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2015
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I have no sixes left for great is the talent on FanStory. If I did you would receive one. You touch my heart with pity and sorrow when I read these particular lines:
uninvited unprompted unfed
drapes itself tightly around
clinging like Saran Wrap
tightening pressure to every last nerve
My observation is that the depth of the poem is watered down, diminished by the size and frivolity of the image selected.
Comment Written 16-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2015
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I'm old and of ill health. I find as much humor as possible in every situation. Helps me get through it all. Thanks for reading. livelylinda
Comment from LIJ Red
The free verse poem here sums up the way Americans seem to live. They rush so
much they become disorganized and still rush even when there's no need. You state the problem well.
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The free verse poem here sums up the way Americans seem to live. They rush so
much they become disorganized and still rush even when there's no need. You state the problem well.
Comment Written 16-Jun-2015
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2015
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Thank you for reading and commenting. livelylinda