Get Well, Brooke!
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Comment from His Grayness
I found this to be a very delightful and uplifting and I'm sure that Brooke will also be uplifted by the genuine spirit and admiration expressed here. Gratitude shown for a true friend and one such as Brooke who is a true "Giver" is a gem to see and I thank you Nancy for this and am proud to join as a new FAN! HIS GRAYNESS: Vance
reply by the author on 30-May-2015
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I found this to be a very delightful and uplifting and I'm sure that Brooke will also be uplifted by the genuine spirit and admiration expressed here. Gratitude shown for a true friend and one such as Brooke who is a true "Giver" is a gem to see and I thank you Nancy for this and am proud to join as a new FAN! HIS GRAYNESS: Vance
Comment Written 29-May-2015
reply by the author on 30-May-2015
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Thank you so much for this lovely review and for becoming a Fan. I am honored. Nancy
Comment from kriver
Hi,
First off what has happened to Brooke?
I have gotten the impression she in a bad way health wise but I don't know what has occurred. I would like to know so I can pray more effectively.
Now the as for the poem, it is a great tribute to your friend. The picture fits the theme and Brooke. I am sure she will like it very much when she reads it. The work flows smoothly.
Over all it is an enjoyable piece to read.
reply by the author on 30-May-2015
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Hi,
First off what has happened to Brooke?
I have gotten the impression she in a bad way health wise but I don't know what has occurred. I would like to know so I can pray more effectively.
Now the as for the poem, it is a great tribute to your friend. The picture fits the theme and Brooke. I am sure she will like it very much when she reads it. The work flows smoothly.
Over all it is an enjoyable piece to read.
Comment Written 29-May-2015
reply by the author on 30-May-2015
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Thank you for reading and for your positive review. Brooke is in the hospital and diagnosed with MS. Go to the Forum (under community at the top of page. Click on "general" there you will see comments about Brooke and messages from her daughter as to her condition. Nancy
Comment from Gaye Hemsley
Thank you Nancy for writing this triolet for our wonderful friend 'Brooke' your poem if lovely, the words say what we all feel. Blessings Gaye
reply by the author on 30-May-2015
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Thank you Nancy for writing this triolet for our wonderful friend 'Brooke' your poem if lovely, the words say what we all feel. Blessings Gaye
Comment Written 29-May-2015
reply by the author on 30-May-2015
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Thanks so much Gaye for the lovely review. I'm glad you liked it. Nancy
Comment from Joy Graham
This is really nice, Nancy :) Great use of the triolet form. Nice repeated lines that work seamlessly. Good meter throughout. It took me a bit to figure out line two with only six syllables. After thinking about it, it works out nice. Kind of the missing man approach as the military does for flypasts at memorial services. A nice message that expresses your feelings well. Brooke will like it :)
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This is really nice, Nancy :) Great use of the triolet form. Nice repeated lines that work seamlessly. Good meter throughout. It took me a bit to figure out line two with only six syllables. After thinking about it, it works out nice. Kind of the missing man approach as the military does for flypasts at memorial services. A nice message that expresses your feelings well. Brooke will like it :)
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Comment Written 29-May-2015
reply by the author on 30-May-2015
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Thank you Joy for your great review. I'm glad you liked it. Nancy
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
This is an excellent triolet for Brooke. The artwork is perfect. Your words are as sweet as those songs of the beautiful bird. I know she will love this. [did you want this in the multi author book? Tom will add it if you PM him and give him the name of this poem AND "Get well, Brooke" where it will be added. Ask him to add it IF you want to.]
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This is an excellent triolet for Brooke. The artwork is perfect. Your words are as sweet as those songs of the beautiful bird. I know she will love this. [did you want this in the multi author book? Tom will add it if you PM him and give him the name of this poem AND "Get well, Brooke" where it will be added. Ask him to add it IF you want to.]
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Comment Written 29-May-2015
reply by the author on 29-May-2015
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Thanks Janny for the great review and the info on adding it to the book. I will PM Tom.
nancy
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yes, do. Be sure to give him the name of your poem and the name of the book. Jan