Get Well, Brooke!
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Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Debi this is a lovely poem for Brooke, beautifully written and the content is perfect. Your third stanza is a little whisp of inspiration, clever, and a thoughtful way of including the dandelion that Brooke wrote about so often. This is one piece of writing she will enjoy reading. Very well done and gentle in its delivery. I wish I had a 6. Warm regards Dorothy x
reply by the author on 31-May-2015
Debi this is a lovely poem for Brooke, beautifully written and the content is perfect. Your third stanza is a little whisp of inspiration, clever, and a thoughtful way of including the dandelion that Brooke wrote about so often. This is one piece of writing she will enjoy reading. Very well done and gentle in its delivery. I wish I had a 6. Warm regards Dorothy x
Comment Written 29-May-2015
reply by the author on 31-May-2015
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Thank you for the virtual six stars, Dorothy. The the thought is appreciated. I did want to work the dandelion in there somewhere, and I appreciate you mentioning it. I hope she recovers enough to write mor of her delightful verse.
Comment from petalangela
This is an ultimate tribute to THE ultimate poetess I have not had the honour of being review by Brooke. This words bring home to me that huge gap in my walk through the works of poetry
reply by the author on 30-May-2015
This is an ultimate tribute to THE ultimate poetess I have not had the honour of being review by Brooke. This words bring home to me that huge gap in my walk through the works of poetry
Comment Written 29-May-2015
reply by the author on 30-May-2015
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This is such high praise. I certainly mean it as a heartfelt tribute to the ultimate poet. She is always so gracious in her remarks and understands the art of helpful suggestions. They are never hurtful, but always encouraging.
Comment from flamingstar
Oooh, S3 is my favorite but they're all wonderful. What a beautiful poem. So much truth in every line. Thanks for the info. about Calliope; fitting for sure.
reply by the author on 30-May-2015
Oooh, S3 is my favorite but they're all wonderful. What a beautiful poem. So much truth in every line. Thanks for the info. about Calliope; fitting for sure.
Comment Written 29-May-2015
reply by the author on 30-May-2015
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Thank you for the great review. I appreciate you pointing out stanza three. Since Brooke likes dandelions I wanted to include them somehow.
Comment from judester
This is a wonderful tribute. A beautiful, flowing poem with such love and clever images shining through each line. She will be proud of you, bravo, cheers judester
reply by the author on 30-May-2015
This is a wonderful tribute. A beautiful, flowing poem with such love and clever images shining through each line. She will be proud of you, bravo, cheers judester
Comment Written 29-May-2015
reply by the author on 30-May-2015
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My goodness, thank you for the super six stars. I appreciate the encouragement! Thank you for the kind comments about the writing. I hope Brooke recovers enough to share poetry with us again. She is such an inspirational part of this site.
Comment from I am Cat
A beautiful addition to this book, and so lovely it is.
We all have our muse... and I've always loved Calliope as well.
Brooke is a great teacher and such a kind, giving spirit...
I'm sure that this will make her smile as it has the rest of us.
Well written and beautifully displayed... I love the artwork.
Well done,
and I'm sure she will love it!
Cat
reply by the author on 30-May-2015
A beautiful addition to this book, and so lovely it is.
We all have our muse... and I've always loved Calliope as well.
Brooke is a great teacher and such a kind, giving spirit...
I'm sure that this will make her smile as it has the rest of us.
Well written and beautifully displayed... I love the artwork.
Well done,
and I'm sure she will love it!
Cat
Comment Written 28-May-2015
reply by the author on 30-May-2015
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Thank you for the kind comments about the poem. All the things you say about Brooke are so true. I don't believe that is a kinder more generous person.
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi,
- This is such a lovely poem and dedication to Brooke.
- It is so neat to see the love pouring out to her.
- Your artwork and formatting is as lovely as your poem.
- Well done, my friend.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*:*)
reply by the author on 30-May-2015
Hi,
- This is such a lovely poem and dedication to Brooke.
- It is so neat to see the love pouring out to her.
- Your artwork and formatting is as lovely as your poem.
- Well done, my friend.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax (*:*)
Comment Written 28-May-2015
reply by the author on 30-May-2015
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Thank you for the kind comments about the poem. I do hope Brooke recovers enough to write again, if she chooses. She is such a positive influence.
Comment from l.raven
HI Debi, I have read some wonderful poems to Brooke....yours is just beautiful...and I love the title...I miss her so much....hope and pray she will be back soon...a wonderful wonderful tribute to Brooke...Luff Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 30-May-2015
HI Debi, I have read some wonderful poems to Brooke....yours is just beautiful...and I love the title...I miss her so much....hope and pray she will be back soon...a wonderful wonderful tribute to Brooke...Luff Linda xxoo
Comment Written 28-May-2015
reply by the author on 30-May-2015
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Thank you, Linda. I appreciate the kind comments about the writing. I agree with you that Brooke is missed so much. I too hope she can recover enough to be back with us soon. She touches so many in such a sportive way. Debi
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yes she does Debi...sigh...who would have guessed...always so welcome...xxoo Linda
Comment from Gloria ....
This reminds me of the Greek Muse and beautiful musical instrument the Calliope. Brooke was indeed capable of making musical poetry. You've captured so many of her wonderful qualities that continue to bring pleasure to so many.
There is no doubt your wonderful poem will bring a smile and glow to Brooke.
Exceptional in every way.
Gloria
reply by the author on 30-May-2015
This reminds me of the Greek Muse and beautiful musical instrument the Calliope. Brooke was indeed capable of making musical poetry. You've captured so many of her wonderful qualities that continue to bring pleasure to so many.
There is no doubt your wonderful poem will bring a smile and glow to Brooke.
Exceptional in every way.
Gloria
Comment Written 28-May-2015
reply by the author on 30-May-2015
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Thank you for the kind comments, Gloria. I admire Brooke so much, as I know you do as well from reading your tribute to her. She is so amazing. I miss her and her poetry. I hope she can recover enough to write some more of her beloved poetry, if she wants.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
This is an excellent presentation. I love the color, the font, the artwork, the rhyme, the flow, the repeated verse, and the super message. I see nothing to change. Good job with this most excellent poem. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 30-May-2015
This is an excellent presentation. I love the color, the font, the artwork, the rhyme, the flow, the repeated verse, and the super message. I see nothing to change. Good job with this most excellent poem. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 28-May-2015
reply by the author on 30-May-2015
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Thank you for the exceptional six stars! And even more for the generous comments about the writing and presentation. I appreciate the encouragement. Debi
Comment from rspoet
You have written a truly beautiful tribute to Brooke
A poem as a pearl, using all the facets in the poets palette:
Rhymes, enjambment, gentle alliteration woven into a spell
Beautiful presentation and picture, framed in blue background, with enchantment for a font
Beautiful
reply by the author on 30-May-2015
You have written a truly beautiful tribute to Brooke
A poem as a pearl, using all the facets in the poets palette:
Rhymes, enjambment, gentle alliteration woven into a spell
Beautiful presentation and picture, framed in blue background, with enchantment for a font
Beautiful
Comment Written 28-May-2015
reply by the author on 30-May-2015
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Thank you for the encouraging review. I am honored by the comments about the writing. I hope we hear news soon on how she is doing.