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Short poems poking fun at the human condition.
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Comment from
gypsycaravan
That is about the funniest senryu I have ever read. I was just laughing out loud and hubby looked at me expecting me to what? That is hysterical, from each word right to the artwork. Fabulous. If I had a six left, your shit would get it. LOL
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Comment Written 28-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2015
Thanks, gyp. We all know what that rhymes with. :-)
Comment from
Sasha
Love the poem it made me laugh, but the illustration is absolutely priceless. That guy looks familiar? Isn't he an actor? Great poem, like I said, you made me laugh out loud.
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Comment Written 28-Jan-2015
reply by the author on 28-Jan-2015
LOL I thought it was a gal on the pot. :-) If a guy, maybe Jeff Daniels?
reply by Sasha on 28-Jan-2015
YES! That is who it is!!!
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