Ain't That The Truth
Viewing comments for Chapter 21 "Anonymous Business "Short poems poking fun at the human condition.
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Comment from gypsycaravan
That is just too funny. I think my side yard is an entire sperm bank. Love this senryu. Talented lady you are, Spitfire.
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That is just too funny. I think my side yard is an entire sperm bank. Love this senryu. Talented lady you are, Spitfire.
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LOL at the line about your side yard. That's too funny too.
Comment from patcelaw
This made me laugh out loud. The location of the entry door was for sperm donors. There are many sperm donors out there donating their sperm for a moment of pleasure. Pat
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This made me laugh out loud. The location of the entry door was for sperm donors. There are many sperm donors out there donating their sperm for a moment of pleasure. Pat
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Comment Written 16-Jan-2015
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Ain't that the truth. :-)
Comment from gailjorben
Love the dichotomy between the weeds pushing through the bush at the sperm donor entrance. Did not see sperm donor coming! Great image.
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Love the dichotomy between the weeds pushing through the bush at the sperm donor entrance. Did not see sperm donor coming! Great image.
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Comment Written 16-Jan-2015
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Thanks, gail. Glad I caught you by surprise.