Comment from Joan E.

Exceptional

Your title and form caught my attention--we don't see many triolets since peter@poole left the site. The repeats and the artwork reinforce your metaphor well in this love poem. I enjoyed your rhymes as well. Best wishes in the contest- Joan

 Comment Written 15-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 17-Dec-2014

Thanks for the more than generous review, Joan and the best wishes. Have a nice week, Ine

Comment from l.raven

Excellent

HI Ine...love this Triolet poem...the form is perfect...and I love the wording...I trip when I see you...two left feet...very nicely written....Luff Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 15-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 17-Dec-2014

So glad you liked it and gave a kind review, Linda. Have a lovely week, Ine

reply by l.raven on 17-Dec-2014

Hi sweetie, you have a great week...what's left...and you are always welcome Ine...love..xxxooo

Comment from MizKat

Excellent

Hi Ine,

What a nicely written Triolet poem this is. I loved how you wrote about your heart.

I haven't been on here very much because of sickness. What a surprise to see they had changed everything around. I couldn't find any of my friends. Sure glad I found them now.

Kat

 Comment Written 15-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 17-Dec-2014

Thanks for your kind review. What was wrong with you, hope you are better now, Ine

Comment from Ronni

Excellent

This is dynamic and fantastic Triolet poem, from the stunning picture
that instantly captures, with very witty, charming verse to describe
a very much in love heart ...its desires and emotions sweetly symbolized
in 'no right feet'....thanks for sharing, best of luck in contest!
Blessings, Ronni

 Comment Written 15-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 17-Dec-2014

Thanks for your kind review and best wishes, Have a nice week, Inee

Comment from misscookie

Excellent

I have no more stars to give.
I love the artwork you choose for your poem,.
I think it's awesome.
Your poem was so cute to read, I like the line my heart has
no right feet.

 Comment Written 15-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 17-Dec-2014

Thanks for your review and I am out of stars too. Have a nice week, Ine

reply by misscookie on 17-Dec-2014

You're very welcome. have a blessed day
Until next time.
Cookie

Comment from TAB_that's me

Excellent

Your triolet poem appears to be in perfect form with good rhymes and good repeating line. Good luck in the contest.
Teresa

 Comment Written 15-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 17-Dec-2014

Thanks for your review and good luck wishes. Have a lovly week, Ine

Comment from amada

Excellent

Lovely work dear Ine. I am still smiling at the feelings of fun and mischievousness in this work. I like a lot "My awkward heart has no right feet..." Best wishes.

 Comment Written 15-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 17-Dec-2014

Thanks for your review and spotting the fun in it. Have a lovely week, Ine

Comment from nancy_e_davis

Excellent

This is one of your best poems, Ine.

Great fun, written with skill, great repeat line which is hard to do!
He makes your heart dance to the point you are tripping over your feet. You're saying you have two left feet. LOL
How cute. Well done. Luck in the contest. :<) Nancy

 Comment Written 15-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 15-Dec-2014

Thanks for your kind review and the nice complements. Have a nice week, Ine

Comment from Dorothy Farrell

Excellent

Hi Ine - this is a charming triolet for the contest. I love the amusing use of metaphor in 'my awkward heart has no right feet' - and 'it always trips when I see you'. Clever! Good Luck in the contest. Warm regards Dorothy x

 Comment Written 15-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 15-Dec-2014

Thanks for your kind review. Have a lovely week, Ine

Comment from Glasstruth

Excellent

Very clever. A love poem about shyness, wanting to be yourself, but then your heart doesn't stand a chance when it skips that awkward beat. An excellent triolet. Les

 Comment Written 15-Dec-2014

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reply by the author on 15-Dec-2014

Thanks for your kind and praising review. Have a nice week, Ine