Comment from kiwijenny

Excellent

Ha ha ha ha ...whatcha guano do when they come for you? .....I'm singing this review,...bad boys bad boys...in this case it's the birds and their doo doo duty
Loved it
God bless

 Comment Written 29-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 29-Nov-2014

I hear your melodic voice-- or does it sound like crap. :-)

reply by kiwijenny on 29-Nov-2014

I make a joyful noise:-0

Comment from Domino 2

Excellent

Jeez!

Looks like that pigeon has digested a huge amount of bullshit dished up by fanstorians, Shari.

I don't understand 'bird duty' but guess it's a play on words of an American phrase...unless it's 'TURD duty'. ;-)

Oh, hang on - maybe 'bird' refers to 'doing time' in prison.

It's fun and clever anyway.

Have a great weekend, Ray.

xx

 Comment Written 29-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 29-Nov-2014

I hear you on that first line. "Duty" is slang for poop;
Thanks Ray. Nice to know I can count on you. Lost another prompt to J. Mercer. Sigh...

Comment from rama devi

Excellent

ha ha ha....good pun on duty. Clever senryu...ironic and punny. Finely presented too (including the poo). Great phonetics in line two with K and C sounds. Outstanding word economy,

Chuckling,
rd

 Comment Written 29-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 29-Nov-2014

Thanks, rd, for the great review. Hope it's not poop. :-) But you're too sincere to do that.

reply by rama devi on 29-Nov-2014

:-)))

reply by rama devi on 29-Nov-2014

:-)))

Comment from Shirley B

Exceptional

Dear Shari, What can I say, You know I love it. I always love your humor and wit. I am one of your biggest fans. Love your play on words. Have a great weekend, Shirley

 Comment Written 29-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 29-Nov-2014

Thanks, Shirley for the six star review. It's a pleasure having you as a fan. I enjoyed your latest too.

Comment from Dean Kuch

Excellent

Holy flying ostriches! What kinda birdie made that whopper of a pooh-doo, I wonder? Whatever kind it was, I hope we don't have any of them where I live!

Jumpin' Jeezus!

 Comment Written 29-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 29-Nov-2014

Isn't that awesome. Look like it came from a Ostrich. Creepy pictures on Google images of cars covered with poop. We have to stop feeding crumbs to the pigeons. I'm sure the food is injected with something.

reply by Dean Kuch on 30-Nov-2014

Yeah, that was really something else, Shari...WoW! :} ~Dean

Comment from Eigle Rull

Excellent

Ha! I love it. It has humor and it has anger. Humor for us and anger for the owner of the car. This is really cute. I love the perfect picture too.

Always with respect,

 Comment Written 29-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 29-Nov-2014

Thanks, ER. Yeap, I'd be sick literally if it were my car.

Comment from Sasha

Excellent

This is so, so clever. How you do this day after day amazes and impresses me. You mind must always be in overdrive to be able to produce so many wonderful poems. Great work with this one, as always.

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 Comment Written 29-Nov-2014

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reply by the author on 29-Nov-2014

Thanks, sasha. Inspiration in this case from my 11 year old grandsom trying to make a funny--Bird's duty to make doodie.