Ain't That The Truth
Viewing comments for Chapter 31 "senryu (plump half circle)"Short poems poking fun at the human condition.
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Comment from Dawn Munro
Great play on words, and the message within the message makes too much sense to me too. Humankind deserves a good mooning, is one way to take it - the other way could be seen as a crisis of faith...
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2014
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Great play on words, and the message within the message makes too much sense to me too. Humankind deserves a good mooning, is one way to take it - the other way could be seen as a crisis of faith...
Comment Written 26-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2014
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Hadn't thought of your second interpretation. Thanks for your input.
Comment from barkingdog
It does look like that doesn't it. You'd be the one to so clever as to forever change my impression of the 'plump half circle.'
Fine senryu. Love all of the 'l' sounds.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2014
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It does look like that doesn't it. You'd be the one to so clever as to forever change my impression of the 'plump half circle.'
Fine senryu. Love all of the 'l' sounds.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2014
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Thanks, Ellen. I laughed at finding the perfect picture.
Comment from mfowler
You've loaded lots of implied imagery and wordplay to this witty senryu. The image shows what you mean about the plump half circle. Now you're saying it's God's bum (not scientifically perfect,methinks), you may have a point. Clever wording, smile provoking fun.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2014
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You've loaded lots of implied imagery and wordplay to this witty senryu. The image shows what you mean about the plump half circle. Now you're saying it's God's bum (not scientifically perfect,methinks), you may have a point. Clever wording, smile provoking fun.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2014
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What can I say? The Lord shows himself in many ways. L0L
Comment from MagKing
Hi! Spitfire
I really do not understand this poem, don't really know how to review it. But I gave it a five. Perhaps it deserves more or less, I stand in between.
...Smiling...
MagKing
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2014
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Hi! Spitfire
I really do not understand this poem, don't really know how to review it. But I gave it a five. Perhaps it deserves more or less, I stand in between.
...Smiling...
MagKing
Comment Written 26-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2014
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Thanks, Mag. Interpretation could be a problem for those in a foreign country. Appreciate the faith based five.
Comment from Domino 2
At least God doesn't appear to have a hairy arse, Shari. Maybe he had a waxing for our benefit. ;-)
Extremely imaginative and fun write.
Cheers, Ray xx
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2014
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At least God doesn't appear to have a hairy arse, Shari. Maybe he had a waxing for our benefit. ;-)
Extremely imaginative and fun write.
Cheers, Ray xx
Comment Written 26-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2014
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Yikes! Do some men really have hair on their buttocks? That would be proof of evolution. L0L
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I don't know about myself, Shari, as I'm not athletic enough to check, and I only have one mirror which saves me from laughing at myself and just allows me to shave...my FACE! LOL xx
Comment from padumachitta
Hi,..oh the play on words. Just a touch or fun irreverance:-9 I had to chuckle and I have to say the wicked side of my humor hopes that many read this and struggle to not laugh!
Good one,
padumachitta
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2014
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Hi,..oh the play on words. Just a touch or fun irreverance:-9 I had to chuckle and I have to say the wicked side of my humor hopes that many read this and struggle to not laugh!
Good one,
padumachitta
Comment Written 26-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2014
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Knew you'd appreciate this, pad. :-9? is that tongue in cheek?
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Hi...it is a typo...but hey, maybe we could start a new emocon:-)
Comment from sibhus
Ha, ha, ha, mooning and laughing at our stupidity. This is a riot and so imaginitive. We all know that moonlight is simply the reflection of the suns rays, but I like your idea. This is some funny stuff there, Spitfire.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2014
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Ha, ha, ha, mooning and laughing at our stupidity. This is a riot and so imaginitive. We all know that moonlight is simply the reflection of the suns rays, but I like your idea. This is some funny stuff there, Spitfire.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2014
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okay, husky, get technical on me. I didn't know that! I flunked science. What can I say?
Comment from Eric1
Hi Spitfire, this is an absolutely brilliant piece of writing my friend, loved the Authors notes on the history of mooning, thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2014
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Hi Spitfire, this is an absolutely brilliant piece of writing my friend, loved the Authors notes on the history of mooning, thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 26-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2014
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Glad you enjoyed, Eric. I added the notes for people in different cultures. Who knows? Maybe it's universal.
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Lol! great stuff spitfire.
Comment from Jewell McChesney
clever clever clever! As always, I find a smile at the end of your great lines! I need to write some more senyru. You've inspired me! Thanks for sharing!
Jewell
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2014
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clever clever clever! As always, I find a smile at the end of your great lines! I need to write some more senyru. You've inspired me! Thanks for sharing!
Jewell
Comment Written 26-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2014
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Thanks, Jewell for the exceptional rating. I look forward to watching for your inspirations.
Comment from Dean Kuch
Hah! How do you think of this stuff (which is always very good, by the way) day in and day out, and do it so well, so consistently, Spit?
I laughed my...well, you know...off after reading your description above your title. I have to agree with you, too. Sometimes, we do deserve it indeed, LOL!
Good stuff. You never cease to amaze me. :}
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2014
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Hah! How do you think of this stuff (which is always very good, by the way) day in and day out, and do it so well, so consistently, Spit?
I laughed my...well, you know...off after reading your description above your title. I have to agree with you, too. Sometimes, we do deserve it indeed, LOL!
Good stuff. You never cease to amaze me. :}
Comment Written 26-Sep-2014
reply by the author on 26-Sep-2014
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I see that under your lethal mask likes a heart of gold --and wisdom too. L0L
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:)
Opinions vary, Shari.
Hey...I think I just made a rhyme! LOL...