Comment from Nosha17

Excellent

Lovely picture which compliments your words well. Good use of imagery and well chosen words to convey your thoughts. Good luck in the contest. FAye

 Comment Written 19-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 19-Aug-2014

Thanks for your kind and nice review. Have a good week, Ine

Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

Your poetry is in high orbit this morning. It's very philosophical with a smooth flow of words, making for an interesting flow of words.

 Comment Written 19-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 19-Aug-2014

Thanks for your kind and nice review. Have a good week, Ine

reply by c_lucas on 19-Aug-2014

You're welcome, Ine. Charlie

Comment from TAB_that's me

Excellent

Ine, you have 6 syllables in the last line. This can easily be modified by taking out 'the'. If you decide to change it let me know and I will change my rating.
Tresa

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 Comment Written 19-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 19-Aug-2014

Thanks for your kind and nice review. Have a good week, Ine

Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

I like the way your tiny poem captures the cycles of nature so simply. You selected the perfect artwork to reinforce your theme. Best wishes in the 3-5-3 Lune contest- Joan

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 Comment Written 19-Aug-2014

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reply by the author on 19-Aug-2014

Thanks for your kind and nice review. Have a good week, Ine