Ain't That The Truth
Viewing comments for Chapter 38 "senryu (erotic novel)"Short poems poking fun at the human condition.
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Comment from DerivedBetter
ok. I had to read this a few times, but finally got it. It was funny. I originally had you down for 4 stars but am now bumping it up cause you made me laugh,
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reply by the author on 26-Aug-2014
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ok. I had to read this a few times, but finally got it. It was funny. I originally had you down for 4 stars but am now bumping it up cause you made me laugh,
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Comment Written 26-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2014
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Thank goodness, you stayed with it. Senryus and haikus aren't always easy to get the satori line.