Southern Comfort
Animal Limerick50 total reviews
Comment from Janet Foor
I love limericks and this is a delightful one.
Very clever and creative.
You paint a picture with your well chosen words.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2014
I love limericks and this is a delightful one.
Very clever and creative.
You paint a picture with your well chosen words.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 15-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2014
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Thank you.
Comment from gazzagodbod
lol loved your armadillo piece my friend great limerick flow and rhyme great work should do well all the best my friend xxgazzaxx
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2014
lol loved your armadillo piece my friend great limerick flow and rhyme great work should do well all the best my friend xxgazzaxx
Comment Written 15-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2014
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Thanks, gazza!
Comment from kiwijenny
This is great rhyming and timing......limericks are tough to get right sometimes but I think this flows well....I like the .....frigerating.......cool :o)
God bless.........well done..................
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2014
This is great rhyming and timing......limericks are tough to get right sometimes but I think this flows well....I like the .....frigerating.......cool :o)
God bless.........well done..................
Comment Written 15-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2014
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Thanks, jenny!
Comment from nelliesellie
I love the limerick. There are no pussy-willow plants where armadillos live. I know what cools them off. That is a sweet armadillo lady. Great work. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2014
I love the limerick. There are no pussy-willow plants where armadillos live. I know what cools them off. That is a sweet armadillo lady. Great work. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 15-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2014
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Yeah, but 'dillopussy didn't rhyme!
Thanks for the kind words
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HA! HA!
Comment from brentman99
Not a bad limerick, but I think that your syllables may be off. I think that the lines that are supposed to have 10 only have 9. However, I know different people count them differently, so it could be me. Thanks for sharing, Brent.
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2014
Not a bad limerick, but I think that your syllables may be off. I think that the lines that are supposed to have 10 only have 9. However, I know different people count them differently, so it could be me. Thanks for sharing, Brent.
Comment Written 15-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2014
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Thanks for reviewing. I find that syllables are less important than the rhythm.
Comment from JM
You made me laugh, not just smile. I am from Texas and I can easily imagine this type of "Southern Comfort". I loved your play of words. You got my vote partner!
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2014
You made me laugh, not just smile. I am from Texas and I can easily imagine this type of "Southern Comfort". I loved your play of words. You got my vote partner!
Comment Written 15-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2014
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Thanks a lot.
Apparently you are one of the few who can imagine.... Do I have to put pussy in capital letters, do you think?
Comment from James Dooney
Well done here on this one ! I like a good limerick so I do and I feel that this one genuinely fits the bill ! well done and good luck !
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2014
Well done here on this one ! I like a good limerick so I do and I feel that this one genuinely fits the bill ! well done and good luck !
Comment Written 15-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2014
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James, thanks for the kind words and the six stars.
Comment from Ben Colder
We BBQ the rascals in east Texas. Not hard to do when having nothing to eat sometimes. Mexicans love them. Just kidding. Luck in the contest. I hope you win.
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2014
We BBQ the rascals in east Texas. Not hard to do when having nothing to eat sometimes. Mexicans love them. Just kidding. Luck in the contest. I hope you win.
Comment Written 15-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2014
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Thanks, Ben. They're forein to me, but I do like the look of them and even the name is cute!
Comment from acerisestory
This is really well written and funny (and suggestive)!
You've made great use of alliteration with fine 'frigerating and plump pussy (willow!), and your rhyming is well done.
This is a great entry for the contest. Best of luck. Alana
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2014
This is really well written and funny (and suggestive)!
You've made great use of alliteration with fine 'frigerating and plump pussy (willow!), and your rhyming is well done.
This is a great entry for the contest. Best of luck. Alana
Comment Written 15-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2014
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Thanks, Alana
Apparently my suggestive wording is a bit too subtle for many reviewers - should I have put pussy in big capitals do you think?
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Maybe :) It really was a good write, Steve. Alana
Comment from drivenbackward
An animal limerick? Yikes. That's hard. But ... you pulled it off well. You even got a slight chuckle out of me. Thanks!
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2014
An animal limerick? Yikes. That's hard. But ... you pulled it off well. You even got a slight chuckle out of me. Thanks!
Comment Written 15-Aug-2014
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2014
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Thank you.
next time I'll go for a hearty chortle.