Just Thinking
Figuring out how blessed I am...25 total reviews
Comment from Eric1
You are so right Loanna, your message in your absolutely beautiful poem comes across crystal clear,'Family is all' These are fantastic words that flow beautifully, the rhyme and rhythm are also excellent, loved every word.
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You are so right Loanna, your message in your absolutely beautiful poem comes across crystal clear,'Family is all' These are fantastic words that flow beautifully, the rhyme and rhythm are also excellent, loved every word.
Comment Written 02-Jul-2014
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi Loanna,
What a beautiful tribute to your hubby, children, and your lives together.
Weighing all the could haves, should haves, yet to do it all again, what path would we take?
Nice, heartfelt.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax
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Hi Loanna,
What a beautiful tribute to your hubby, children, and your lives together.
Weighing all the could haves, should haves, yet to do it all again, what path would we take?
Nice, heartfelt.
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jax
Comment Written 02-Jul-2014
Comment from Acquired Taste
I believe regrets are inherent in life - and so many people do not have the blessing of such beautiful memories as you.
I cannot imagine being again on my own and not having a memory bank of love.
Very nice. AT=/
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I believe regrets are inherent in life - and so many people do not have the blessing of such beautiful memories as you.
I cannot imagine being again on my own and not having a memory bank of love.
Very nice. AT=/
Comment Written 02-Jul-2014
Comment from OLA THOMAS
There are so many things everyman/woman would have done in the past and when they come to mind, they come with some sort of guilt and regret. But it is a good thing to count one's blessings and see the brighter things the Lord had done. I like the progression in this piece.
ola thomas
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There are so many things everyman/woman would have done in the past and when they come to mind, they come with some sort of guilt and regret. But it is a good thing to count one's blessings and see the brighter things the Lord had done. I like the progression in this piece.
ola thomas
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Comment Written 02-Jul-2014
Comment from Charlene0513
To LoannaLois,
An invariably hard pill to swallow when life does not amount to all you hoped it would have been but then greater are we just to know how blessed we truly are knowing that the Lord always had our backs.
Many wonderful areas of enjambments.
Charlene
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To LoannaLois,
An invariably hard pill to swallow when life does not amount to all you hoped it would have been but then greater are we just to know how blessed we truly are knowing that the Lord always had our backs.
Many wonderful areas of enjambments.
Charlene
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Comment Written 02-Jul-2014