The Confessional Booth
100 Word contest Entry- This is strictly fictional35 total reviews
Comment from mfowler
As a Catholic, I should be affronted by your story, but, how could I? It's too damned funny. Well written. Good luck in the comp.
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2014
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As a Catholic, I should be affronted by your story, but, how could I? It's too damned funny. Well written. Good luck in the comp.
Comment Written 05-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2014
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Thank you my friend for your excellent review, I appreciate your kind words. Have a great day.
Comment from Dean Kuch
Bwa-ha-ha-ha-haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!! Oh, dear God, are you gonna' take some heat for this one! But not from me, my funny friend, 'cause I just happen to believe this is a true story.
This is too good for words, so I'm just going to congratulate you on your win, and move on...
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2014
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Bwa-ha-ha-ha-haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!! Oh, dear God, are you gonna' take some heat for this one! But not from me, my funny friend, 'cause I just happen to believe this is a true story.
This is too good for words, so I'm just going to congratulate you on your win, and move on...
Comment Written 04-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2014
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Thanks Deano. I appreciate your excellent review my friend. I'm already feeling the heat rise a little and I'm sure it will get much hotter before it's over. But, what the hell, that's what writing is all about. Have a great day....
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Well, heat or no heat, at least you're funny money bank will be a bit more full, LOL!
You are very welcome.
Comment from Selina Stambi
Hmm ... busted, Father!!
An amusing piece, mystery writer - an element of biography, perhaps? Truth is stranger than fiction!
Best wishes for the contest.
Sonali
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2014
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Hmm ... busted, Father!!
An amusing piece, mystery writer - an element of biography, perhaps? Truth is stranger than fiction!
Best wishes for the contest.
Sonali
Comment Written 04-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2014
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Thanks Sonali for your excellent review, I appreciate it. Have a great day my friend.
Comment from royowen
What a very funny entry in this short story contest! I must admit I had trouble containing my mirth! I found this work to be articulate and expressively clear in its well written narrative, I loved it! Well done, good luck with this hilarious entry! Blessings, Roy.
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2014
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What a very funny entry in this short story contest! I must admit I had trouble containing my mirth! I found this work to be articulate and expressively clear in its well written narrative, I loved it! Well done, good luck with this hilarious entry! Blessings, Roy.
Comment Written 04-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2014
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Thank you very much Roy for your wonderful review, I'm glad you enjoyed it my friend. Have a blessed day.
Comment from stanishmichelle
This is so funny. The sayings "Practice what you preach" and Do as I say and not what I do" comes to mind after reading your amusing story. You wrote it well and the witty ending was great. Good luck. Michelle
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2014
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This is so funny. The sayings "Practice what you preach" and Do as I say and not what I do" comes to mind after reading your amusing story. You wrote it well and the witty ending was great. Good luck. Michelle
Comment Written 04-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2014
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Thank you Michelle for your excellent review, I appreciate your comments. Have a great day my friend.
Comment from Michaelk
Absolutely hilarious! Great story. I wondered where you were going with that but what an ending. Great twist. I'm sure there's some people who would go to that confessional all the time. Well done.
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2014
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Absolutely hilarious! Great story. I wondered where you were going with that but what an ending. Great twist. I'm sure there's some people who would go to that confessional all the time. Well done.
Comment Written 04-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2014
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Thank you for your excellent review, I appreciate your comments very much. Have a great day. Bill
Comment from adewpearl
I'm laughing my head off at the description of the priest's side of the confessional box, which sounds like the interior of a gentleman's club LOL
Good dialogue and reveal in the closing :-) Brooke
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2014
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I'm laughing my head off at the description of the priest's side of the confessional box, which sounds like the interior of a gentleman's club LOL
Good dialogue and reveal in the closing :-) Brooke
Comment Written 04-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2014
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Thanks Brooke for your excellent review, I'm glad it made you laugh. If all confessionals were really like this, I'm sure there would be long lines of people waiting to get in. Take care.
Comment from missjosi
Hahaha Well done and very amusing!! Short snappy little 100 worder... Best of luck in the competition...............................Warmest wishes and kind regards :)
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2014
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Hahaha Well done and very amusing!! Short snappy little 100 worder... Best of luck in the competition...............................Warmest wishes and kind regards :)
Comment Written 04-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2014
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Thank you so much missjosi for your excellent review, I appreciate it. Also, welcome to this site my friend.
Comment from Zinnia48
Congratulations on my second belly laugh of the day! This is too, too funny. I grew up Catholic and am waaaaay familiar with the confessional booth. AND I am not surprised by the accomodations. I didn't know where you were going with this, and appreciate how you kind of snuck that last line in! Great fun. Thanks! Caroline
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2014
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Congratulations on my second belly laugh of the day! This is too, too funny. I grew up Catholic and am waaaaay familiar with the confessional booth. AND I am not surprised by the accomodations. I didn't know where you were going with this, and appreciate how you kind of snuck that last line in! Great fun. Thanks! Caroline
Comment Written 04-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2014
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Thank you so much Caroline for your wonderful review and rating, I appreciate it very much. You have made my day! When a writer receives two belly laughs from the same person on the same day, well, it's time to celebrate. Truly, I'm thrilled that you enjoyed it. Have a great day my friend and don't forget to go to confession.....
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There's a cathederal close by--I may take a peak! c.
Comment from NurseBarb
Hilarious!!! Love this entry, especially since I'm not Catholic. Makes it even more funny. A lot of great entries and having a hard time deciding. Keep the funny ones coming--You're good at it.
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2014
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Hilarious!!! Love this entry, especially since I'm not Catholic. Makes it even more funny. A lot of great entries and having a hard time deciding. Keep the funny ones coming--You're good at it.
Comment Written 04-Jun-2014
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2014
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Yep, for sure I'm calling NurseBarb. Thank you very much for your wonderful review, I really appreciate your thoughts. Have a nice evening.