Comment from Karen B.

Excellent

Ha, ha, a unique little story and very well told in these few words. Excellent use of humor and dialogue. This should do well in the contest! Good luck with it!

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2014

Thank you, Karen, for the excellent review.

Comment from Cajungirl

Excellent

What a wonderfully humorous story. You have done an excellent job telling a complete story in only one hundred words. Great job, best of luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2014

Thank you, Cajungirl, for the excellent review.

Comment from Smoothiecool

Excellent

good luck in the contest

your hundred words allow the reader to see and feel Billy's
dilemma and how he could think of ways to allow his glass eye not to hinder his way of life by comical play

reads well

cheers Smoothiecool

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2014

Thank you, Smoothiecool, for the excellent review.

reply by Smoothiecool on 15-Apr-2014

most welcome....SC

Comment from jmdg1954

Exceptional

Okay author. YOU NAILED IT!!!... the reluctance to meet others was gone in the blink of an eye... great, great ending line. You got me with that one.

This clearly has to be the front-runner in the voting, my friend.

John

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2014

Thank you, John, for the fantastic review. I'm so pleased you liked this.

Comment from Spiritual Echo

Excellent

Extremely clever, well written and about a subject, I swear, I've never seen on Fan Story.

Great entertainment on this, once again, snowy morning.

 Comment Written 15-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2014

Thank you, SE, for the excellent review.

Comment from Millibrad

Excellent

I think your story does an excellent job of meeting all the requirements of the contest. It was an enjoyable read. Good luck in the contest.

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 Comment Written 15-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2014

Thank you, Millibrad, for the excellent review.

Comment from Nottoway

Excellent

I loved this clear and concise story about someone being put at ease about a difficult affliction. It so difficult for one to know how they will be perceived and difficult for those around to deal with such things because they don't know how a person will react.

Bravo!

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 Comment Written 15-Apr-2014

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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2014

Thank you, Nottoway, for the excellent review.