The Imagination
look up in the sky...28 total reviews
Comment from Lulube
Well you filled this prompt out with a magnificent powerful poem. You not only used a powerful character but your visions for this Superman was to create a peaceful world with no nation going without food. that is a powerful thought from you.
Great flowing lines and rhymes.
good luck in the contest
I like the last 2 lines as the summary for your inspiration.
lulube
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2014
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Well you filled this prompt out with a magnificent powerful poem. You not only used a powerful character but your visions for this Superman was to create a peaceful world with no nation going without food. that is a powerful thought from you.
Great flowing lines and rhymes.
good luck in the contest
I like the last 2 lines as the summary for your inspiration.
lulube
Comment Written 10-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2014
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Thank you my friend for your wonderful review and rating, I appreciate it very much. It seems as though world peace is slipping further away each day and I fear for the future of our children. Take care of yourself and God bless you and your family. Bill
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welcome
lulube
Comment from country ranch writer
RIGHTING THE WORLD BACK TO NORAL WOULD BE NICE STOP THE PRESIDENT FROM MAKING THINGS ANYWORSE THAT HE ALREADY HAS. EVEN ANOTHER IS GOING TO HAVE HELL TURNING THIS AROUND TO ANY DEGREE OF HAPPINESS. HE IS DOING HIS BEST TO CONVERT US TO MUSLIMS BEFOR HE LEAVES OFFICE
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2014
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RIGHTING THE WORLD BACK TO NORAL WOULD BE NICE STOP THE PRESIDENT FROM MAKING THINGS ANYWORSE THAT HE ALREADY HAS. EVEN ANOTHER IS GOING TO HAVE HELL TURNING THIS AROUND TO ANY DEGREE OF HAPPINESS. HE IS DOING HIS BEST TO CONVERT US TO MUSLIMS BEFOR HE LEAVES OFFICE
Comment Written 09-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2014
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Thank you my friend for your thoughts and I agree with you. I believe that our country is at the point of no return. I believe that things will just continue to get worse as time goes by and I fear for the future of our children. Take care of yourself my friend. Bill
Comment from Angel Debbie
Super power away. Where is this person that speaks so well.
Let's find him we need Him!
This world now has so many needs that I feel for my children and grandchildren. What little hope they have to fix all the bad that has been done to this point.
What a super write. Great job poet!
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2014
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Super power away. Where is this person that speaks so well.
Let's find him we need Him!
This world now has so many needs that I feel for my children and grandchildren. What little hope they have to fix all the bad that has been done to this point.
What a super write. Great job poet!
Comment Written 09-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 10-Apr-2014
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Thank you Angel for your wonderful review and rating, I appreciate your thoughts. I completely agree with you, our world is falling apart and getting worse each day. I also fear for the future of our children and grandchildren. I'm afraid we're at the point of no return. I've always heard that history has a way of repeating itself and we've already had 2 world wars. God help us all. Take care of yourself Angel and have a nice day my friend. Bill
Comment from RYME4U
Well written. I like how you list so many feats that you could perform. I'm glad you would use super power to benefit mankind. Nicely rhymed and easy flowing rhythm. Good job!
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2014
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Well written. I like how you list so many feats that you could perform. I'm glad you would use super power to benefit mankind. Nicely rhymed and easy flowing rhythm. Good job!
Comment Written 09-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2014
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Thank you my friend for your review, I appreciate it very much. Have a real nice day.
Comment from l.raven
Hi Bill, yes it would be wonderful...I always say thank God I am not a witch or a genie...a lot of people would be hurting big time...love how you used Supermans powers...and I love your story told...a great poem...now put your cap on and show me your stuff...go save someone...LOL...very well written... luff Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2014
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Hi Bill, yes it would be wonderful...I always say thank God I am not a witch or a genie...a lot of people would be hurting big time...love how you used Supermans powers...and I love your story told...a great poem...now put your cap on and show me your stuff...go save someone...LOL...very well written... luff Linda xxoo
Comment Written 09-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2014
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Well, thank you very much my good friend for all your nice words and that great rating. Hey, I feel the same as you, if I had all those powers, it could be a bad situation for some. If you go outside today and look up in the sky, it won't be a bird or a plane, it will be me flying by. If I'm not on my way to save somebody, I'll drop by for awhile (ha). Take care my friend. Bill
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LOL...I'll look for ya...Maybe!!!!and you are always so welcome...xxoo luff
Comment from Pegcook
The rhymes and near rhymes work really well. I especially liked the part about gathering world leaders, locking them in until they agreed there would never be another war! Yes, in our daydreams we can make anything happen... maybe that's why we invite them to come back again and again. Thanks for posting The Imagination."
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2014
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The rhymes and near rhymes work really well. I especially liked the part about gathering world leaders, locking them in until they agreed there would never be another war! Yes, in our daydreams we can make anything happen... maybe that's why we invite them to come back again and again. Thanks for posting The Imagination."
Comment Written 09-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2014
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Thank you Peg for your nice comments, I appreciate you dropping by. Have a real nice day my friend.
Comment from grannyfrannie
I wanted to simply write a one-word comment . . YES! But that is not allowed. So . . you did a remarkable job using exactly 120 words and relaying the message. I agree with all the things you wish you could do. Get rid of weapons, hunger, abuse and apathetic rulers. Good job.
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reply by the author on 09-Apr-2014
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I wanted to simply write a one-word comment . . YES! But that is not allowed. So . . you did a remarkable job using exactly 120 words and relaying the message. I agree with all the things you wish you could do. Get rid of weapons, hunger, abuse and apathetic rulers. Good job.
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Comment Written 09-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2014
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I'm really glad that you liked it. Wouldn't it be wonderful to have the power to do all those things. I had so much more that I wanted to add, but the sponsor only allowed 120 words. Take care and keep writing. Bill
Comment from akulkumol
Nice poem to describe one's desire to do so many good things for this world after getting the super power. So many good people are there just thinking about it makes me happy. Nice thought loved reading it.
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reply by the author on 09-Apr-2014
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Nice poem to describe one's desire to do so many good things for this world after getting the super power. So many good people are there just thinking about it makes me happy. Nice thought loved reading it.
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Comment Written 09-Apr-2014
reply by the author on 09-Apr-2014
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Thank you my friend for your kind words, I appreciate your thoughts. Have a wonderful day. God bless you.