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Viewing comments for Chapter 15 "Cahore"Words to pass on to my children
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Comment from cory4
Dear jackarrie,
I enjoyed reading your poem. I hope you have actually found yourself, and what you want in life. I love your painting, you are a remarkably talented person, as a poet and artist. If I were you I would keep doing both. Your poem is very descriptive, and I know it creates a lot of feelings in the reader. It made me hope that you got what you wanted, and that you could be happy now.
Kind Regards,
Cory4
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reply by the author on 24-Mar-2014
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Dear jackarrie,
I enjoyed reading your poem. I hope you have actually found yourself, and what you want in life. I love your painting, you are a remarkably talented person, as a poet and artist. If I were you I would keep doing both. Your poem is very descriptive, and I know it creates a lot of feelings in the reader. It made me hope that you got what you wanted, and that you could be happy now.
Kind Regards,
Cory4
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Comment Written 24-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2014
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I love your kind review, and yes I am very happy, it took years searching, and I am very contented at the moment. Thanks for such an encouraging review. Mary
Comment from CR Delport
I love the ocean and wish I could have a little place near the beach. It must be quite pleasant to write in such an environment. :) This is well written, and a great picture too.
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reply by the author on 24-Mar-2014
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I love the ocean and wish I could have a little place near the beach. It must be quite pleasant to write in such an environment. :) This is well written, and a great picture too.
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Comment Written 24-Mar-2014
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2014
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Thank you CR, for the wonderful review and comments. I did not write when I lived there, only to write in my diary spiritual happenings etc. I learned to paint, I am only writing poetry since I began here last May. Mary