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Comment from marijmd
What a lovely and beautifully written piece - I read it through at least three times - I very much enjoyed it! Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2013
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What a lovely and beautifully written piece - I read it through at least three times - I very much enjoyed it! Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 02-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2013
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Thank you very much :)
Comment from Leineco
The eyes may beckon
the lips may entice
the arms may reach and embrace
but only possession
of my heart
will earn you eternity.
Nice write :-)
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2013
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The eyes may beckon
the lips may entice
the arms may reach and embrace
but only possession
of my heart
will earn you eternity.
Nice write :-)
Comment Written 02-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2013
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Thank you...yours also, very nice!!
Comment from Zue65
Yes that's the beauty of love, it can inspire you to write and imagine the heights and depths of the emotion and passion of that thing called love. Your poem captured effectively that. Thanks for sharing the poem, God bless.
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2013
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Yes that's the beauty of love, it can inspire you to write and imagine the heights and depths of the emotion and passion of that thing called love. Your poem captured effectively that. Thanks for sharing the poem, God bless.
Comment Written 01-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2013
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Thank you so much for reading and your kind words..
Comment from GracieAnn
AnnieGale, this non-rhyming couplet poem celebrates the love of one toward the object of his/her love. It depicts appropriate and tasteful words that convey powerful emotions. Nicely done. :0 GracieAnn
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2013
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AnnieGale, this non-rhyming couplet poem celebrates the love of one toward the object of his/her love. It depicts appropriate and tasteful words that convey powerful emotions. Nicely done. :0 GracieAnn
Comment Written 01-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2013
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Thank you so much GracieAnn for reading and your kind words..
Comment from Siouxsun
Beautiful love poem and beautiful sentiments. The second sentence is sweet. May this kind of love be lasting and forever.
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2013
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Beautiful love poem and beautiful sentiments. The second sentence is sweet. May this kind of love be lasting and forever.
Comment Written 01-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2013
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Thank you, I appreciate your thoughtful words...
Comment from KG Writes
AnnieGale You should change your category to "Romance". This is lovely and sweet and could be a tribute to the one you love. Wonderful illustration to compliment your piece. A most enjoyable read. KG Writes
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reply by the author on 01-Dec-2013
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AnnieGale You should change your category to "Romance". This is lovely and sweet and could be a tribute to the one you love. Wonderful illustration to compliment your piece. A most enjoyable read. KG Writes
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Comment Written 01-Dec-2013
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2013
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Thank you KG Writes...I will take your input to heart, I appreciate it very much.
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AnnieGale You are most welcome. Have a wonderful evening. KG Writes