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Words Make or Break!

Word power in making or breaking your personality. 96 words

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Comment from DanielEkine
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Beautifully written.
A short poem of how words can help build you or break your spirit. it's a good poem and the author is definitely capable of more intrigue in his words. I could feel such sensation reading this poem.

 Comment Written 20-Jul-2013

Comment from MM lives on :)
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Words should be used wisely in people, at the right time, level and place. yes indeed my friend, you take very few words and create a nice message, well done!

 Comment Written 20-Jul-2013

Comment from Cookie333
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Thank you for the gentle reminder of the power of words. When used for good, they may darken the light and instill hope,
Thank you my friend
K

 Comment Written 20-Jul-2013

Comment from sweetwoodjax
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this is very wel lw ritten, alcreator, you did an excellent job writing this essay about the way words spoken make the person. choose wisely and think about what your words will bring about.

 Comment Written 20-Jul-2013

Comment from William Walz
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Unlike some of your other posts, you presently a clear message here. This was very well-written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.

 Comment Written 20-Jul-2013

Comment from Gracie619
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Excellent piece. Thank you for sharing this. I especially like the line about you cannot control people. How very true. I wish more people would realize this. Great job!

 Comment Written 20-Jul-2013

Comment from Rosalyne
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Hi Alcreator,
Your article was well written. Words are the windows to life, as you so well stated, "words should be used wisely in people." Such a powerful sentence.
Thanks for sharing.
Bye
Rosalyne

 Comment Written 20-Jul-2013

Comment from Jade Lawson
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This is really introspective. Indeed you ought to think before speak, words can hurt like a knife or having a positive effect too. Think before talking and with who, not everyone may understand what you are trying to convey, in the same, everyone will have different perspectives and tolerance. Nice flow and good message.

 Comment Written 20-Jul-2013

Comment from GWHARGIS
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This sounded like a mantra that control freaks should learn. You can not control fate or others. No truer words have been spoken. I liked the point blank direction of this.

 Comment Written 20-Jul-2013

Comment from GaryCecil
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This is a nice little human-realization piece. It had a point and you wrote it very well. Keep up the good work.




Words used unwisely can defame or condemn your personality or distort your name. - I feel like a comma should be in there somewhere. :)

 Comment Written 20-Jul-2013