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Viewing comments for Chapter 18 "Beautiful Release."
All of my poems of release.

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Comment from country ranch writer
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CUTTING ONES SELF IN ORDER TO FEEL AND BE CLEANSED OF HER WRONG DOING IS NOT THE WAY TO GO JUST SAYING IF IT DON'T STOP IT WILL STOP YOU DEAD IN YOUR TRACKS WHEN YOU LEAST EXPECT IT

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 Comment Written 30-Apr-2013

reply by the author on 30-Apr-2013
    It's not about me and yes I agree they may pay the ultimate price one day. I don't suppose that's foremost in their minds when they do it. That's why it's so sad. Thanks for reading. Jaq x
reply by country ranch writer on 30-Apr-2013
    I DIDN'T THINK IT WAS ABOUT YOU. ITS JUST A GENERAL POEM OF WHAT SOME PEOPLE SEE AND DO . I HAVE A NIECE WHO IS A CUTTER SHE HAS BEEN SINCE SHE WAS 9
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2013
    Ahhhh now I understand. It's just when you type in capital letters it seems quite cross.

    I hope your niece has all the help she needs. May God bless and keep her safe. Jaq x
reply by country ranch writer on 30-Apr-2013
    ITS GETTING LATE AND THE EYES ARE NOT DOING WELL IN THIS LIGHT
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2013
    Awww take care x
reply by country ranch writer on 30-Apr-2013
    TKY
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My goodness, this is bleak! It goes some way to explaining self-harm. It's certainly a very effective poem ... one can only hope that it is not autobiographical.

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 Comment Written 30-Apr-2013

reply by the author on 30-Apr-2013
    No it isn't. The notes say what it's about. It's a family member. Thanks for your review and I'm glad you understood the words mo chara. :) Jacquie xxx
reply by Rondeno on 30-Apr-2013
    What an eejit. I didn't see the notes.
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2013
    But a lovely eejit :) hahahaha x
reply by Rondeno on 30-Apr-2013
    Thank you! I've a favour to ask ... I'll email you a bit later.
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2013
    No probs x
reply by Rondeno on 30-Apr-2013
    (ingratiating grin)

    And there's another one about una piedra negra