All Those Puzzling Pieces
Viewing comments for Chapter 20 "Second Cup of Coffee"What makes a life? How do the pieces fit?
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Comment from Robin Gilmor
Clever write, enjoyable read. You made it interesting from the very beginning. I enjoyed the way you built it up until the end.
Thank you for sharing. Smiles, Robin :)
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2013
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Clever write, enjoyable read. You made it interesting from the very beginning. I enjoyed the way you built it up until the end.
Thank you for sharing. Smiles, Robin :)
Comment Written 09-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2013
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Thanks so much Robin! :)
Comment from Scarbrems
aah, coffee, the writer's preferred drug. Odd socks do multiply, don't they? Opposites attract...Nicely done, fun and creative write. I can't find any holes to pick, so no darning required on this piece. Well done, again, for making me smile.
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2013
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aah, coffee, the writer's preferred drug. Odd socks do multiply, don't they? Opposites attract...Nicely done, fun and creative write. I can't find any holes to pick, so no darning required on this piece. Well done, again, for making me smile.
Comment Written 09-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2013
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Well, darn it, emsey, you're a doll! :)S
Comment from robina1978
After hubby and son are gone, you fancy a nice cupper. But then it starts going all weird with all these socks staring at you:) And wanting their share of the coffee. A well written free verse. Sounds good and plenty poetic devices.
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2013
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After hubby and son are gone, you fancy a nice cupper. But then it starts going all weird with all these socks staring at you:) And wanting their share of the coffee. A well written free verse. Sounds good and plenty poetic devices.
Comment Written 09-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2013
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You've got it! :)))
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LOL
Comment from JM daSilva
You are so poetic you find a way to write a poem about mismatched socks. That's how you can tell a person has poetry in her heart. Anything is an excuse for a cute poem.
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2013
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You are so poetic you find a way to write a poem about mismatched socks. That's how you can tell a person has poetry in her heart. Anything is an excuse for a cute poem.
Comment Written 09-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 09-Mar-2013
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oh how funny, I was busy writing your review at the same time you were reading about mismatched socks! :)))
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Great. We are in synch. lol.
Comment from MidnightWriter4U
I had a huge "I can relate" smile on my face the entire time as I was reading this. I personally think scientists need to explore this phenomenon. It is a universal occurrence of great magnitude that has been a hindrance to mankind for hundreds of years. We need answers!! Write your congressman!
Perhaps they exist to show us the chaos of our own lives....
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2013
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I had a huge "I can relate" smile on my face the entire time as I was reading this. I personally think scientists need to explore this phenomenon. It is a universal occurrence of great magnitude that has been a hindrance to mankind for hundreds of years. We need answers!! Write your congressman!
Perhaps they exist to show us the chaos of our own lives....
Comment Written 08-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2013
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well enough with the chaos already! I'm thinking of melding with another household, just to get them all to meet each other! :)))
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LOL! You can start here! I think I have about twenty. Don't have the heart to throw them out. MN :)
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haah! we should start a club! see! it's an OCD thing!
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Oh, I am definitely OCD! The funny part is that, the older I get, the harder it is to keep up my compulsiveness. Therefore, one could say aging improves any problem. ;)
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Well I guess that's ONE thing to look forward to, hmm?
Comment from poesyapprentice
Well look at you, making something wonderful from some ol' socks, lol! Delightful with sound meaning, Lovely. I enjoyed the perfect line/thought division of this piece along with the rest! Had fun with those - - - : ) You rock your socks, girlfriend!
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2013
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Well look at you, making something wonderful from some ol' socks, lol! Delightful with sound meaning, Lovely. I enjoyed the perfect line/thought division of this piece along with the rest! Had fun with those - - - : ) You rock your socks, girlfriend!
Comment Written 08-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2013
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thx poesy - the caffeine did it! :))
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So drink some more!!!! : )
Comment from fairy77
ha ha loved that I was drinking coca cola today:)Yeh it can make me pretty hyper too. Loved this one and found it humourous. Hope eventually got second cup. Have a great weekend friend:) beth fairy77.
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2013
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ha ha loved that I was drinking coca cola today:)Yeh it can make me pretty hyper too. Loved this one and found it humourous. Hope eventually got second cup. Have a great weekend friend:) beth fairy77.
Comment Written 08-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2013
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got my 2nd cup, no worries - coke? that stuff'll kill ya!! :)S
ps: Beth, did my reply offend you in some way? I was talking only about coca cola dear - joking, because I say that to my husband all the time. But I see you've muted me and I had no wish to offend you. My apologies if I did, ok?
Blessings
Sharyn
Comment from Jumbo J
Hi Sharyn,
a change of pace, but you still hit your rhythmic flow with a beat that ring a tune and although about the dreaded conspiracy of the sock revolt against wanting to go back onto unappreciative feet that do not recognize there worth. You made me smile lovely lady and that's what counts, wacky,whimsical and wondrous.
Kindest thoughts,
James xx
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2013
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Hi Sharyn,
a change of pace, but you still hit your rhythmic flow with a beat that ring a tune and although about the dreaded conspiracy of the sock revolt against wanting to go back onto unappreciative feet that do not recognize there worth. You made me smile lovely lady and that's what counts, wacky,whimsical and wondrous.
Kindest thoughts,
James xx
Comment Written 08-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2013
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2nd cups of coffee are to be highly recommended James - must be punchy by the end of the week! :)S
Comment from Opal H.
Oh I see it now... Caffeine makes socks seem romantic! This poem is pretty funny - your characteristic sense of humor!!
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2013
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Oh I see it now... Caffeine makes socks seem romantic! This poem is pretty funny - your characteristic sense of humor!!
Comment Written 08-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2013
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thx Opal - TGIF, right? (Thank God It's Friday)! S
Comment from Spitfire
What a fun read. I see the socks as metaphors for chores that have been neglected and must be done. They do keep piling up all the time!
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2013
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What a fun read. I see the socks as metaphors for chores that have been neglected and must be done. They do keep piling up all the time!
Comment Written 08-Mar-2013
reply by the author on 08-Mar-2013
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If that's the case, spits, I'm in a pretty bad way! :)))