haiku (gentle April breeze)
haiku 5-7=526 total reviews
Comment from MAMONIA
Read all of the entries and liked this one best.
The picture is the perfect compliment to the
words. I love the image of confetti falling.
It is a true haiku, very lovely way to describe
the blossoms ruffling.
Best of luck in the contest.
Marie
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2013
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Read all of the entries and liked this one best.
The picture is the perfect compliment to the
words. I love the image of confetti falling.
It is a true haiku, very lovely way to describe
the blossoms ruffling.
Best of luck in the contest.
Marie
Comment Written 11-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2013
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Thank you, Marie. I'm so glad you liked it - it means a lot coming from you.
Comment from GWHARGIS
Beautiful imagery. The sequence of your words made me see the blossoms then feel the breeze, then see the petals fall like snow. Nice picture choice. Nicely done.
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Beautiful imagery. The sequence of your words made me see the blossoms then feel the breeze, then see the petals fall like snow. Nice picture choice. Nicely done.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2013
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Thank you so much for generous review
Comment from EMB
I'd say this entire poem was created just so you could call it "pink confetti" because that is such an awesome description. Great use of format with this one, my friend.
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I'd say this entire poem was created just so you could call it "pink confetti" because that is such an awesome description. Great use of format with this one, my friend.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2013
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Ha! You found my plot. Thank you for the wonderful review
Comment from Capricorn30
A well-written haiku, mystery poet;
I like the incorporation of spring, as this is one of haiku's many rules--a seasonal reference;
"pink confetti falls"--a wonderful satorical conclusion, good analogy of confetti to cherry blossoms
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2013
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A well-written haiku, mystery poet;
I like the incorporation of spring, as this is one of haiku's many rules--a seasonal reference;
"pink confetti falls"--a wonderful satorical conclusion, good analogy of confetti to cherry blossoms
Comment Written 11-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2013
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Thank you for this lovely review
Comment from Galactia
gentle April breeze 5
ruffles cherry blossom bough 7
pink confetti falls 5
This is an excellent written Haiku, in a 5'7'5 format, really enjoyed your creativity with pink confetti falls
a delightful read.
GL in the contest
Regards
tia
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2013
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gentle April breeze 5
ruffles cherry blossom bough 7
pink confetti falls 5
This is an excellent written Haiku, in a 5'7'5 format, really enjoyed your creativity with pink confetti falls
a delightful read.
GL in the contest
Regards
tia
Comment Written 11-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2013
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Thank you Tia
Comment from dmt1967
I like April the start of spring where the land comes alive again I love to see the trees bloom again very well written thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest
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I like April the start of spring where the land comes alive again I love to see the trees bloom again very well written thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest
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Comment Written 11-Jan-2013
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2013
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Thank you for your generous review