All Those Puzzling Pieces
Viewing comments for Chapter 7 "Beach Sleep"What makes a life? How do the pieces fit?
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Comment from pattipac
Ah, your soothing words almost lulled me to sleep,girl. Great picture selection segues directly into you well written work. The use of alliteration added to the reality of your work.
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Ah, your soothing words almost lulled me to sleep,girl. Great picture selection segues directly into you well written work. The use of alliteration added to the reality of your work.
Comment Written 31-Oct-2012
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thx patti! zzzzzzzzzzzzz
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thx patti! zzzzzzzzzzzzz
Comment from Eliza M
You lucky girl! It's been pouring down with rain here through grey skies and I've had to put the heating on it;s so chilly.
Beautiful composition Sharyn with a real calming quality.Great use of alliteration and consonance of 's' sounds. Liz.
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You lucky girl! It's been pouring down with rain here through grey skies and I've had to put the heating on it;s so chilly.
Beautiful composition Sharyn with a real calming quality.Great use of alliteration and consonance of 's' sounds. Liz.
Comment Written 31-Oct-2012
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thx Liz! :)
Comment from Aaron James
I was recently in Jamaica enjoying just such a scene. Managed to avoid "Sandy" only to return to the grimy weather of the good old UK.
Your poem makes me want to get right back on that plane and head towards those lazy days in the sun.
Very pleasant read.
Regards Aaron
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2012
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I was recently in Jamaica enjoying just such a scene. Managed to avoid "Sandy" only to return to the grimy weather of the good old UK.
Your poem makes me want to get right back on that plane and head towards those lazy days in the sun.
Very pleasant read.
Regards Aaron
Comment Written 31-Oct-2012
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thx Aaron! zzzzzzzzzzzzzz :)
Comment from gazzagodbod
hmm up to my knees in rain hair all but blown off my head and wet shoes my afternoon in england lol thanks my friend lol xxgazzagodbodxx
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hmm up to my knees in rain hair all but blown off my head and wet shoes my afternoon in england lol thanks my friend lol xxgazzagodbodxx
Comment Written 31-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2012
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plenty of room at the beach gazza ... best get outta there while you still have hair dear! :)
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Is pulling his mankini on as we speak x
Comment from marycec
Sounds lovely especially as I hear the rain and wind outside and see the sky darkening.The repeated s words make for a feeling of sensuousness and the warmth is conveyed in your soft sounds throughout. Ah, if only...
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Sounds lovely especially as I hear the rain and wind outside and see the sky darkening.The repeated s words make for a feeling of sensuousness and the warmth is conveyed in your soft sounds throughout. Ah, if only...
Comment Written 31-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2012
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plenty of room on the beach Mary! :)
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I suppose meditation is an option! Enjoy your beautiful surroundings!
Comment from Maureen's Pen
LOL How hard can it be??? Bloody difficult for me, so I shall bask in your heavenly beach sleep and dream soon I can have my own:)
I enjoyed this one, strong imagery and your slowing pace for the reader worked like a charm.
Thanks for sharing.
Maureen
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LOL How hard can it be??? Bloody difficult for me, so I shall bask in your heavenly beach sleep and dream soon I can have my own:)
I enjoyed this one, strong imagery and your slowing pace for the reader worked like a charm.
Thanks for sharing.
Maureen
Comment Written 31-Oct-2012
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Maureen it's so lovely to hear your wonderful voice! Plenty of room at the beach, dear, come on over! :) Sharyn
Comment from RaymondJohn
Take the "p" off the last word for the ultimate read. I'm about snoring by the time I got there anyway. Nice rolling tempo and quiet background. Fine write. Ray.
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Take the "p" off the last word for the ultimate read. I'm about snoring by the time I got there anyway. Nice rolling tempo and quiet background. Fine write. Ray.
Comment Written 31-Oct-2012
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oh that would be fun! :)
Comment from Dodey
How could one not sigh aloud, when reading of this idylic afternoon you spent... Wonderful choice of words, from which come clear breathtaking images..
If we were exchanging postcards, mine would read..Weather here in Wales, Wet and Windy and Worrible, I'm now showing signs of rust. :)
Bravo Sharyn, always something new and exciting when I come to read you...Smiles and Regards ..Dee
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How could one not sigh aloud, when reading of this idylic afternoon you spent... Wonderful choice of words, from which come clear breathtaking images..
If we were exchanging postcards, mine would read..Weather here in Wales, Wet and Windy and Worrible, I'm now showing signs of rust. :)
Bravo Sharyn, always something new and exciting when I come to read you...Smiles and Regards ..Dee
Comment Written 31-Oct-2012
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oh Worrible in Wales ... best come over and spend quality time on my beach Dee! :) Sharyn
Comment from BLACKDYKE
Give me a nudge when the sun goes down
1234, and I bet you know just how it
feels on that balmy beach don't you!
The picture, the colours and the gentle
way of your poem is so attractive.
Eric
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Give me a nudge when the sun goes down
1234, and I bet you know just how it
feels on that balmy beach don't you!
The picture, the colours and the gentle
way of your poem is so attractive.
Eric
Comment Written 31-Oct-2012
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glad you enjoyed the snooze Eric! :)
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my pleasure
Comment from Littlegirl38732
This is absolutely beautiful as is all of your work! I love the descriptiveness and the flow of this poem. I love when the writers words paint a clear picture in the readers mind as this one has. It makes me feel like I am there.
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This is absolutely beautiful as is all of your work! I love the descriptiveness and the flow of this poem. I love when the writers words paint a clear picture in the readers mind as this one has. It makes me feel like I am there.
Comment Written 31-Oct-2012
reply by the author on 31-Oct-2012
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come on over Lg ... plenty of room on the beach! :) Sharyn