All Those Puzzling Pieces
Viewing comments for Chapter 40 "Three Faces of Love"What makes a life? How do the pieces fit?
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Comment from Selestia
Very good free verse form. I like the three different loves described in the three stanzas. The first two kinds of love are swallowed in the last kind of love the "all encompassing, and encompassing All" love that represents God's love. If this love truly is
. . . way beyond the stars and
fourth dimension of imagination
even the universe as we know it
then the first two loves do not end with death.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2012
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Very good free verse form. I like the three different loves described in the three stanzas. The first two kinds of love are swallowed in the last kind of love the "all encompassing, and encompassing All" love that represents God's love. If this love truly is
. . . way beyond the stars and
fourth dimension of imagination
even the universe as we know it
then the first two loves do not end with death.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 27-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2012
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ths Selestia! good points ... All! :)Sharyn
Comment from vfbryant
Love the way you examined three types of love, their differences and similarities, and their natures with regard to time and eternity. Many of your phrases were unique and descriptive, and when a poet can do that with a subject as common as this, I think that's quite a feat.
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2012
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Love the way you examined three types of love, their differences and similarities, and their natures with regard to time and eternity. Many of your phrases were unique and descriptive, and when a poet can do that with a subject as common as this, I think that's quite a feat.
Comment Written 27-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2012
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thx so much vf - yes, that was the challenge - how to write NOT in cliches! :)Sharyn
Comment from lappmellott
I enjoyed reading your poem on all the sides of love. It is well written and I can identify with all three sides of the love you speak about here. Thanks.
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I enjoyed reading your poem on all the sides of love. It is well written and I can identify with all three sides of the love you speak about here. Thanks.
Comment Written 27-Aug-2012
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thx so much!
Comment from Anisa-
Interesting view of what love is to you and great imagery to go with it. Well done. Especially the last verse, that was most interesting.
Anisa
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Interesting view of what love is to you and great imagery to go with it. Well done. Especially the last verse, that was most interesting.
Anisa
Comment Written 27-Aug-2012
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thx Anisa!
Comment from squid152
I liked three faces of love. I wish there could be more. Mother's is quite special. The love for your spouse is special too. Then it comes back around.-Squid
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I liked three faces of love. I wish there could be more. Mother's is quite special. The love for your spouse is special too. Then it comes back around.-Squid
Comment Written 27-Aug-2012
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thx squid!
Comment from Mary Ann MCPhedran
A GOOD FREE VERSE POEM AND NEEDS NO CHANGES MADE TO IT.I enjoyed reading your poem and the wording and the art work blends well with the poem. Mary
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A GOOD FREE VERSE POEM AND NEEDS NO CHANGES MADE TO IT.I enjoyed reading your poem and the wording and the art work blends well with the poem. Mary
Comment Written 27-Aug-2012
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thx Mary Ann!
Comment from rjuselius
i love the idea of "three faces of love". you have captured the message well. love is all around us even when you say nothing at all.
thank you for sharing!
good luck in the contest!
rebekka x
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2012
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i love the idea of "three faces of love". you have captured the message well. love is all around us even when you say nothing at all.
thank you for sharing!
good luck in the contest!
rebekka x
Comment Written 27-Aug-2012
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thx rebekka!
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, visionary, you did a great job writing this free verse poem about the differetn kinds of love and the essence of each of them, i enjoyed reading it
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this is very well written, visionary, you did a great job writing this free verse poem about the differetn kinds of love and the essence of each of them, i enjoyed reading it
Comment Written 27-Aug-2012
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thx sweets!
Comment from RangerEric
Well done. Even though free verse you had a nice flow and all three were woven together well. It did loosen up a bit at the end. The background made it a bit hard to see but I enjoyed this read. Good job and well written.
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2012
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Well done. Even though free verse you had a nice flow and all three were woven together well. It did loosen up a bit at the end. The background made it a bit hard to see but I enjoyed this read. Good job and well written.
Comment Written 27-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 27-Aug-2012
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thx Eric - I lightened up the background a little - I must have good glasses! :) Sharyn
Comment from guinea
Beautifully written poem. Your words speak firmly and sincerely. Shows deep thought. The imagery is good. Enjoyed reading this. Good job.
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2012
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Beautifully written poem. Your words speak firmly and sincerely. Shows deep thought. The imagery is good. Enjoyed reading this. Good job.
Comment Written 26-Aug-2012
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2012
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and thank you!:)