The Heir Apparent
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Comment from c_lucas
Keep up the good work. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very strong read. It looks like James' father is going to get his just reward.
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reply by the author on 16-Apr-2012
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Keep up the good work. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very strong read. It looks like James' father is going to get his just reward.
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Comment Written 16-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2012
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I feel bad that it may be his mother that puts the nail in his coffin.
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His mother gave him life. How he lives it is his choice.
Comment from RebelRose
with her before you ask [you] questions."
Alfina is coping pretty well with all that is going around her, all so new to her. That, of course, in due to a great degree, to Angela's friendship and guidance and James' constant overseing of the situation. Another great chapter.
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with her before you ask [you] questions."
Alfina is coping pretty well with all that is going around her, all so new to her. That, of course, in due to a great degree, to Angela's friendship and guidance and James' constant overseing of the situation. Another great chapter.
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Comment Written 16-Apr-2012
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2012
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She has so much to learn about the world having been kept literally in the dark her entire life.