Comment from Linda England Bonam

Excellent

Thanks so much for sharing this fine poem. It was a good one to read and it was a pleasure. Nice presentation as well. If you are the daughter, then you must be following in their footsteps to become a writer.

 Comment Written 14-Feb-2012

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reply by the author on 14-Feb-2012

Thank you for the kind reveiw

Comment from cheyennewy

Excellent

Hi keimosobie,

You have written a fine poem about your good friend. It is an accomplished free verse with expressive word selection and an even flow. Well done....blessings, chey

 Comment Written 14-Feb-2012

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reply by the author on 14-Feb-2012

Thank you for the kind reveiw

Comment from Patrick G Cox

Excellent

Hi keimosobie

A very nice poem, it made me think f the times my wife asks me to "tell her a story" so she can relax and drift off ...

Good form, a good message and a nice rhythm.

Patrick

 Comment Written 14-Feb-2012

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reply by the author on 14-Feb-2012

Thank you for the kind reveiw glad you enjoyed the poem

Comment from BLACKDYKE

Excellent

And you wrote it well Emily, it serves
to tell us your feelings about your
friend. It ain't rocky, it's my poem!
The colours make it easy to read and
enjoy. Eric

 Comment Written 14-Feb-2012

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reply by the author on 14-Feb-2012

Thank you for the kind reveiw

reply by BLACKDYKE on 15-Feb-2012

my pleasure

Comment from Dustybones

Excellent

Keimosobies, How cute of a name to have picked. Sound like a very good friend indeed. Very lucky guy to be thought of in such a wonderful way.

 Comment Written 14-Feb-2012

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reply by the author on 14-Feb-2012

Thank you for the kind reveiw

Comment from Dklrdmcches

Excellent

What passion. This piece speaks to the heart from the heart and the soul is warmed by the near thought of holding another. Great structure and the tone fits the mood of the piece...dark lord

 Comment Written 14-Feb-2012

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reply by the author on 14-Feb-2012

Thank you it was a bit different than what I usually write but the idea wouldn't leave me alone

reply by the author on 14-Feb-2012

Thank you it was a bit different than what I usually write but the idea wouldn't leave me alone

Comment from Bobbi22

Excellent

I read this poem a few times. It is very well-written. On the surface it does seem to be a message about the comfort received from a friend. But then at the end, you added "My song of virtue the voice of reason" which makes me wonder if there may also be a deeper meaning. Very good poem.

 Comment Written 14-Feb-2012

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reply by the author on 14-Feb-2012

Thank you I left it hanging so you could use your imagination

reply by the author on 14-Feb-2012

Thank you I left it hanging so you could use your imagination

Comment from pickthorn

Excellent

A romantic and blissfull poem of love, expressed so eloquently with a sincere message from the heart. The words flow smoothly and delicately. Great job.

 Comment Written 14-Feb-2012

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reply by the author on 14-Feb-2012

Thank you it was a bit rocky to write but I like the outcome

reply by the author on 14-Feb-2012

Thank you it was a bit rocky to write but I like the outcome

Comment from Margaret Snowdon

Excellent

a poem of friendship and love,
presented as free verse.

I can see his smile through his words.. I particularly like this line.

Its lovely -it's


Margaret

 Comment Written 14-Feb-2012

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reply by the author on 14-Feb-2012

That's the most trickiest line that I had to write but I like you for the kind reveiw

reply by the author on 14-Feb-2012

That's the most trickiest line that I had to write but I like you for the kind reveiw

Comment from tango494

Excellent

Wow, what a lovely and very touching poem you have shared with me. I think the flow and tempo of the wording was superb. I loved everything about this submission. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 14-Feb-2012

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reply by the author on 14-Feb-2012

Thank you very much for the kind reveiw

reply by the author on 14-Feb-2012

Thank you very much for the kind reveiw