Say What You Will: Day 2., Pt 1
Gwen & I are lost26 total reviews
Comment from marion
Hi there
I too wrote about my dog when she had to go. It helped in so many ways. Reading your story, brought me right back to when I was in the same position. It broke my heart as it is breaking yours. Clear, clean, concise writing. I hope by telling the story, your pain will ease a little. Marion.
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2011
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Hi there
I too wrote about my dog when she had to go. It helped in so many ways. Reading your story, brought me right back to when I was in the same position. It broke my heart as it is breaking yours. Clear, clean, concise writing. I hope by telling the story, your pain will ease a little. Marion.
Comment Written 23-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2011
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yes, Marion, writing the story helped me know I did the right thing -- love, jan
Comment from KinaSalad
I enjoyed reading your script and would like to tell you about what I use for my dog when she's not well. Colloidal silver, I've been making my own for the past 4 years and use it on myself as well. A good example was earlier this week my dog was poisoned and I gave her the colloidal silver and within minutes she stopped her twitting and recovered by the next morning and recommend it to anyone. Thanks for sharing
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2011
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I enjoyed reading your script and would like to tell you about what I use for my dog when she's not well. Colloidal silver, I've been making my own for the past 4 years and use it on myself as well. A good example was earlier this week my dog was poisoned and I gave her the colloidal silver and within minutes she stopped her twitting and recovered by the next morning and recommend it to anyone. Thanks for sharing
Comment Written 23-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2011
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thanks, KinaSalad -- I'll be looking into the colloidal silver for future issues with my animals -- love, jan
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do so, you won't be sorry
Comment from amarherig14
I wish I had a six for this amazing story of love from a caring person to her pet. It is an emotional writing And you suffered like it was a member of your family.I wish you have recovered from this loss. Good luck.
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2011
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I wish I had a six for this amazing story of love from a caring person to her pet. It is an emotional writing And you suffered like it was a member of your family.I wish you have recovered from this loss. Good luck.
Comment Written 23-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2011
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it is enough you thought about a six, amarherig24 -- thanks for caring -- love, jan
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Itried to find the review I wrote for your poem /story and can not find it.I am going to edit to a six.I also want to be your fan and find out what happened to Mac.Blessings.
Comment from rchitwood
This is so sad and I was really hoping this would end better.Good dialogue and characters.Very creative and it is believable.Blessings Rita
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2011
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This is so sad and I was really hoping this would end better.Good dialogue and characters.Very creative and it is believable.Blessings Rita
Comment Written 23-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2011
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yes, Rita, so was I. Gwen, Mac's twin, and I are still reeling. love, jan
Comment from Queenise
Love your story and am sad for you as I read it. Your love is transparent and touches the heart and pulls the reader in and hold attention to the end. Heart wrenching and filled with great imagery. Blessings. Queenise
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reply by the author on 20-Aug-2011
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Love your story and am sad for you as I read it. Your love is transparent and touches the heart and pulls the reader in and hold attention to the end. Heart wrenching and filled with great imagery. Blessings. Queenise
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Comment Written 23-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2011
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thanks, Queenise -- Gwen and I are still reeling from his loss -- love, jan
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You're welcome. Queenise
Comment from egmosley
RD,
I am not an animal lover per se, but this is so emotionally touching until it has opened my eyes to a side that I never knew existed between a pet and its owner....I am really impressed with how deeply emotional this has made me...well done...I couldn't stop reading.
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reply by the author on 20-Aug-2011
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RD,
I am not an animal lover per se, but this is so emotionally touching until it has opened my eyes to a side that I never knew existed between a pet and its owner....I am really impressed with how deeply emotional this has made me...well done...I couldn't stop reading.
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Comment Written 23-Jul-2011
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2011
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thank you, egmosley -- I am honored and humbled by this review -- love, jan
