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Viewing comments for Chapter 20 "Pardon My Latin"
A collection of my poems

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Comment from kimmydabomb
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I love the graphics, I think that the expression goes with the flow. I like French, I appreciate the translation provided because I was able to go back and read it again to fully understand it. Thank you.

 Comment Written 12-Jun-2011


reply by the author on 13-Jun-2011
    Thanks, I think.
    You don't say why only two stars.
    Steve
reply by kimmydabomb on 13-Jun-2011
    Oh no I apologize, sometimes when I get excited I rush to leave a comment. It was far better than two stars. Is there anyway I can change it?
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2011
    I think if you go back to the poem it will bring up your previous review and you just change it there and save it again.
    Thanks
    Steve
Comment from Cumbrianlass
Exceptional
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Yes, and I loved the French one as well! This is so very clever. You have a real talent for this bi-lingual stuff. I laughed all the way through. Some may say it isn't really poetry. I say it's brilliant.

 Comment Written 12-Jun-2011


reply by the author on 13-Jun-2011
    Maybe we'll compromise and just call it verse!
    Wordsworth it ain't! Byron maybe :o)
    Steve
Comment from Sophiaalexandra
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hahah that was cute. i thought that was pretty funny and interesting. it was well written and i liked the random latin you threw in. nice job. thanks for sharing.

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 Comment Written 12-Jun-2011


reply by the author on 13-Jun-2011
    Thanks.
    knew those years of Latin would come in useful for something sometime!
    Steve
Comment from sgalletti
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Absolutely hilarious Steve! As a lover of Lastin (I studied it in high school) I thoroughly enjoyed how clever, inventive, and yes, difficult, this poem must have been to write! Adding a great flow, rhyme and well written dialogue just add to my awe of this piece. Very fun to read. Kudos! a masterul job...Hugs, Sue

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 Comment Written 12-Jun-2011


reply by the author on 12-Jun-2011
    How quick off the mark are you? I only just posted - still got to get a certificate on it!
    Thanks.
    Steve
reply by sgalletti on 12-Jun-2011
    Just happened to be reviewing when yours popped up in my PMs LOL!