Death's Sadness
A sad day.121 total reviews
Comment from mumsyone
The way news travels today, the whole world mourns the death of a great person, all at the same time.
I enjoyed reading your poem for review.
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The way news travels today, the whole world mourns the death of a great person, all at the same time.
I enjoyed reading your poem for review.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2011
Comment from LoveLifeKnight
well i dont exactly know whose life your talking about, if its someone the whole world actually knew or it just feels like it. either way its a good poem. makes me pause and think
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well i dont exactly know whose life your talking about, if its someone the whole world actually knew or it just feels like it. either way its a good poem. makes me pause and think
Comment Written 15-Jun-2011
Comment from ameen786
Hello poet, what a poignant write, not sure if you have experience some personal loss, but the creativity of your verses applies to all who have lost a loved one, great job.
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Hello poet, what a poignant write, not sure if you have experience some personal loss, but the creativity of your verses applies to all who have lost a loved one, great job.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2011
Comment from jallis25
So sad but yet true for many have lost a loved one in a single day without any knowledge that it is to happen. If you wrote this because you lost someone I am sorry for I have yet to experience this pain, but if you have not and are just sharing for others sack you sill did a lovely job of doing so, keep up your writing skills, and thank you for sharing.
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So sad but yet true for many have lost a loved one in a single day without any knowledge that it is to happen. If you wrote this because you lost someone I am sorry for I have yet to experience this pain, but if you have not and are just sharing for others sack you sill did a lovely job of doing so, keep up your writing skills, and thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2011
Comment from Judith Ann
There is a lot of feeling in those few words. Well said, I felt that same way a few months ago myself. I hope your words are not from experience. Good writing. -Judy
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There is a lot of feeling in those few words. Well said, I felt that same way a few months ago myself. I hope your words are not from experience. Good writing. -Judy
Comment Written 15-Jun-2011
Comment from Xylok
this is so true of so many it seems. powerfully writ, no strings attached, no punches pulled. indeed greatness is lost when anyone perishes, unless it is displaced only, and lost only to the one who beheld it, but perhaps not to the one or ones who created it etc. there is always hope as far as i can tell. this poem is poignant anywhere anytime, great post.
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this is so true of so many it seems. powerfully writ, no strings attached, no punches pulled. indeed greatness is lost when anyone perishes, unless it is displaced only, and lost only to the one who beheld it, but perhaps not to the one or ones who created it etc. there is always hope as far as i can tell. this poem is poignant anywhere anytime, great post.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2011
Comment from Paradox Tremors
Sad when a heart stops beating and the soul of that persons leaves us until we're reunited in Heaven. A good write and makes me wonder about how the world will think of me when my life stops--good, I hope. A great, great write my friend.
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Sad when a heart stops beating and the soul of that persons leaves us until we're reunited in Heaven. A good write and makes me wonder about how the world will think of me when my life stops--good, I hope. A great, great write my friend.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2011
Comment from Rdfrdmom2
boomachicka:
Today was a sad day in my area for two women, born about
thrity years apart and from two very different backgrounds, were buried today. They both touched the lives of untold
numbers of children -- one through the public school system; the other through teaching Sunday School for many,
many years. They will both be missed a great deal. This
5-7-5 would have fit both of them well.
good luck in the contest
thank you for sharing
love,
jan
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boomachicka:
Today was a sad day in my area for two women, born about
thrity years apart and from two very different backgrounds, were buried today. They both touched the lives of untold
numbers of children -- one through the public school system; the other through teaching Sunday School for many,
many years. They will both be missed a great deal. This
5-7-5 would have fit both of them well.
good luck in the contest
thank you for sharing
love,
jan
Comment Written 15-Jun-2011
Comment from Auroraboreal800
I REALLY LIKE THIS CLEVERLY WRITTEN POEM. I CAN SEE HOW EACH WORD WAS VERY CAREFULLY CHOSEN, AND THE BEAUTIFUL ARTWORK AS WELL.
WONDERFUL!!
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I REALLY LIKE THIS CLEVERLY WRITTEN POEM. I CAN SEE HOW EACH WORD WAS VERY CAREFULLY CHOSEN, AND THE BEAUTIFUL ARTWORK AS WELL.
WONDERFUL!!
Comment Written 15-Jun-2011
Comment from tango494
Wow, What pure sadness and deep emotion you were able to capture in such a few words. I could fell such pain and depth. Your picture added a lot to. Thanks for sharing and best wishes.
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Wow, What pure sadness and deep emotion you were able to capture in such a few words. I could fell such pain and depth. Your picture added a lot to. Thanks for sharing and best wishes.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2011