The Heir Apparent
Viewing comments for Chapter 24 "A Talk With Mom"A family learns their father is a serial killer
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Comment from vickib
Ah man you got me, now I have to wait. I wasn't as far behind as I thought. I was ready to hear what she had to say and... I really enjoyed all these chapters and if I had a six I'd send you one for all those chapters. So I'll catch you later but I'm telling you there is a lot of time and thought put into them and they are full of great dialog and description and a tad bit of humor too. XO Vicki
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2011
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Ah man you got me, now I have to wait. I wasn't as far behind as I thought. I was ready to hear what she had to say and... I really enjoyed all these chapters and if I had a six I'd send you one for all those chapters. So I'll catch you later but I'm telling you there is a lot of time and thought put into them and they are full of great dialog and description and a tad bit of humor too. XO Vicki
Comment Written 05-Apr-2011
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2011
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Thanks so much. I plan to post another chapter tomorrow so you won't have long to wait.
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Comment from RebelRose
Oh, now it's about to come out. I can't wait for the next chapter. Some of this sounds familiar from before but a lot of it I don't remember. It's like reading it all anew. It's great.
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2011
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Oh, now it's about to come out. I can't wait for the next chapter. Some of this sounds familiar from before but a lot of it I don't remember. It's like reading it all anew. It's great.
Comment Written 05-Apr-2011
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2011
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There are some similarities but from now on most will be going in a completely different direction. I am very pleased you liked this one.
Comment from Belinda
Wow, Sasha, this is an interesting chapter, and very teasing! You should immediately post the next chapter, or else ... •?? The episode you sketched is very vivid as if I was in the same room with mom and son (but of course James will send me away harshly, won't he?)
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2011
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Wow, Sasha, this is an interesting chapter, and very teasing! You should immediately post the next chapter, or else ... •?? The episode you sketched is very vivid as if I was in the same room with mom and son (but of course James will send me away harshly, won't he?)
Comment Written 05-Apr-2011
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2011
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Thanks. I plan to post the next chapter tomorrow so you won't have long to wait.
Comment from Deejharrington
Now, you've left us with one hell of a cliff hanger! We have to wait until the next chapter to find out what his mom had to say? I hope you're writing away! Terrific chapter with a terrific ending. I'll be waiting.
deb
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2011
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Now, you've left us with one hell of a cliff hanger! We have to wait until the next chapter to find out what his mom had to say? I hope you're writing away! Terrific chapter with a terrific ending. I'll be waiting.
deb
Comment Written 05-Apr-2011
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2011
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No to worry, I plan to post the next chapter tomorrow. Glad you enjoyed this one.
Comment from Gungalo
Wow!!! Now this is a story I could wrap my read around111 Seems there's a bit I need to catch up on but I know I am with it in this chapter.
Your characters here, thought not much is actually said, are memorable, especially given your author's notes about his IQ. I love what I've read so far and your ability to show little details throughout this chapter makes it all so believable.
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2011
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Wow!!! Now this is a story I could wrap my read around111 Seems there's a bit I need to catch up on but I know I am with it in this chapter.
Your characters here, thought not much is actually said, are memorable, especially given your author's notes about his IQ. I love what I've read so far and your ability to show little details throughout this chapter makes it all so believable.
Comment Written 05-Apr-2011
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2011
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Thanks. I have had the good fortune to know several geniuses. My daughter's best friend in the third grade would bring home chemistry, physics, and book on Einstein's theory of relativity for casual reading. Despite her intelligence she was amazingly normal. Glad you enjoyed this chapter. Tomorrow we get to hear what mom has to say.
Comment from Dale95
Really good writing. The tension of the scene came right through cyber space in the words you wrote and there were three of us sitting at the table. Good job!
Some things are better left pried open and I've got a can opener for James. Can't wait to find out what she knew.
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2011
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Really good writing. The tension of the scene came right through cyber space in the words you wrote and there were three of us sitting at the table. Good job!
Some things are better left pried open and I've got a can opener for James. Can't wait to find out what she knew.
Comment Written 05-Apr-2011
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2011
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James is not someone to leave a stone unturned. I am thrilled you enjoyed this chapter.
Comment from Halfree
Stuff is happening, story is starting to move. I am doing this from my I Pad and not totally sure of how it all works. I like this chapter bur it is too short.Makes for a choppy read. Might think about longer chapters to help move things along. Dialog good and scene setting good. Just need more in a chapter.
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2011
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Stuff is happening, story is starting to move. I am doing this from my I Pad and not totally sure of how it all works. I like this chapter bur it is too short.Makes for a choppy read. Might think about longer chapters to help move things along. Dialog good and scene setting good. Just need more in a chapter.
Comment Written 05-Apr-2011
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2011
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In the final manuscript I will probably combine several of the short chapters into a single one. Many of my reviewers have complained about long chapter...go figure. Glad you still liked this one.
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Glad to see you back on form.
Comment from words
Ah, I can not wait until you post the next chapter.
I want to know what his mother has to say ... I want to know what she knows.
I am hooked.
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2011
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Ah, I can not wait until you post the next chapter.
I want to know what his mother has to say ... I want to know what she knows.
I am hooked.
Comment Written 05-Apr-2011
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2011
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Thanks. I hope to post the next chapter tomorrow so you won't have to wait too long.
Comment from MAMONIA
Written so beautifully, as only you can do.
You have such a gift for describing people,
emotions and problems even when insurmountable.
I think this is a beautiful piece of work and
well written to make the reader want to be
wherever it is you are.
God bless your talents and for sharing your
wonderful works. Marie
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2011
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Written so beautifully, as only you can do.
You have such a gift for describing people,
emotions and problems even when insurmountable.
I think this is a beautiful piece of work and
well written to make the reader want to be
wherever it is you are.
God bless your talents and for sharing your
wonderful works. Marie
Comment Written 05-Apr-2011
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2011
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Thank you very much. I am a very emotional person and enjoy writing about them. Comes in handy. Glad you enjoyed this chapter.
Comment from sweetwoodjax
this is very well written, and another good chapter for your book, it is intense and full of emotion on both the part of the mother and the son, just have to see what the mother is going to say next
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2011
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this is very well written, and another good chapter for your book, it is intense and full of emotion on both the part of the mother and the son, just have to see what the mother is going to say next
Comment Written 05-Apr-2011
reply by the author on 05-Apr-2011
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Thanks. I hope to post the next chapter tomorrow. Glad you enjoyed this one.