The Fox Hole
A desert epiphany22 total reviews
Comment from highlander104
Great entry for this prompt. Suspense held this reader from beginning to end. Excellent closing line. Good luck in the contest.
Jean K.
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2010
  |
Great entry for this prompt. Suspense held this reader from beginning to end. Excellent closing line. Good luck in the contest.
Jean K.
Comment Written 23-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2010
-
Thank you Jean - I appreciate you reading and for your kind feedback!
Comment from Spiritual Echo
Extremely well developed in just a few words.
Everything about this posting works.
Good luck.
xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2010
|
Extremely well developed in just a few words.
Everything about this posting works.
Good luck.
xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 23-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2010
-
Thank you for reading and for your kind feedback!
