Short Stories
Viewing comments for Chapter 9 "You Must Be Joking!"A book of a mixture of stories
40 total reviews
Comment from RKagan
Wow, what a great surprise ending. I was not expecting that at all. You had me going with all of the "things" that seemed to be going wrong. great story.
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2010
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Wow, what a great surprise ending. I was not expecting that at all. You had me going with all of the "things" that seemed to be going wrong. great story.
Comment Written 01-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2010
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My apologies for being so late..but your support is no less appreciated. Thank you..Carol
Comment from Rama Rao
That is a good April fool's story.
There is no doubt about that as I was thinking of Murphy's laws and what else could go wrong for Shelly.
One point, isn't it a bit early for these stories?
Never mind. I enjoyed reading it.
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2010
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That is a good April fool's story.
There is no doubt about that as I was thinking of Murphy's laws and what else could go wrong for Shelly.
One point, isn't it a bit early for these stories?
Never mind. I enjoyed reading it.
Comment Written 01-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2010
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My apologies for being so late..but your support is no less appreciated. Thank you..Carol
Comment from Carolyn Hilliard
Hi there. An interesting write, and a heck of a surprise at the end. THIS IS SEPARATE FROM THE WRITING YOU've been writing about; Right? Sorry I hit something and my caps got stuck; then unstuck.
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2010
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Hi there. An interesting write, and a heck of a surprise at the end. THIS IS SEPARATE FROM THE WRITING YOU've been writing about; Right? Sorry I hit something and my caps got stuck; then unstuck.
Comment Written 01-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2010
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My apologies for being so late..but your support is no less appreciated. Thank you..Carol
Comment from Realist101
SO mean!! Really, to make her almost throw up? I sure would never want friends like that. Maybe I just dont' like having the wool pulled over my eyes? Lol. Interesting tho, I was surprised by the ending! Great one Carol! I love your dialogue!! HUGS! Susan...I didn't get new sixes Sunday???? UPDATED this rating, my five didn't even "stick"??? EVIL EVIL eddie! "(
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2010
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SO mean!! Really, to make her almost throw up? I sure would never want friends like that. Maybe I just dont' like having the wool pulled over my eyes? Lol. Interesting tho, I was surprised by the ending! Great one Carol! I love your dialogue!! HUGS! Susan...I didn't get new sixes Sunday???? UPDATED this rating, my five didn't even "stick"??? EVIL EVIL eddie! "(
Comment Written 01-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2010
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It must have evil eddie makingme write such a terrible a thing..you think> lol smiles, Carol
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No, just talent! ") I am happy to hear from you Carol! Lots of great things to read by you!! ") So glad...I hope you have a great weekend! Hugs!! Susan
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Hanging out at the hsopital until just a while ago..Though my honey had a stroke, but it's just a serious infection and his sugar levels hit 504..instead of below 100. My life never seems to mellow..Smiles, Carol
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OH no. Is he going to be alright Carol?? I think you and I have the same curse on us. Boy, my strife just never ends either. We have some health stuff to "look forward to" as well, I dread what is to come. Does your husband have diabetes? My brother does, and passed out while driving once. We hit a parked car in a mall lot. Please tell him your fanfriend said GET WELL SOON!? gee, it HAS to get better. Luv, Susan
Comment from Trybuck
That was mean, mean, mean!!! There's no other way to describe it... Just plain mean!! Well... I could say it was a bit humorous.. But mean says it better!
I did notice a couple of small typos, nothing too bad.
Well done, Buck
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2010
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That was mean, mean, mean!!! There's no other way to describe it... Just plain mean!! Well... I could say it was a bit humorous.. But mean says it better!
I did notice a couple of small typos, nothing too bad.
Well done, Buck
Comment Written 01-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2010
Awesome..your thoughts and the stars..Thank You! Carol
Comment from Belinda
What a confusing day for Shelly. Kate and Rob did all they can do (even make several others talk about the company's plan to move to Seattle) to give her an April Fool day to remember. (It would be more timely if you posted it in April, though ...:))
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2010
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What a confusing day for Shelly. Kate and Rob did all they can do (even make several others talk about the company's plan to move to Seattle) to give her an April Fool day to remember. (It would be more timely if you posted it in April, though ...:))
Comment Written 01-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2010
Awesome..your thoughts and the stars..Thank You! Carol
Comment from fictionwriter
Oh, that was just not nice. Poor girl could have had a heart attack with all of that stress heaped on her. Well they got her good. Great job.
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2010
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Oh, that was just not nice. Poor girl could have had a heart attack with all of that stress heaped on her. Well they got her good. Great job.
Comment Written 01-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2010
Awesome..your thoughts and the stars..Thank You! Carol
Comment from humpwhistle
Oh Begin Again, this is a very cruel prank. And worse, I fell for it! Who writes April Fool's stories in November?
There ought to be a law. I'm thinking of calling Homeland Securtity. You are a menace. I'll get you back.
Peace, Lee
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2010
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Oh Begin Again, this is a very cruel prank. And worse, I fell for it! Who writes April Fool's stories in November?
There ought to be a law. I'm thinking of calling Homeland Securtity. You are a menace. I'll get you back.
Peace, Lee
Comment Written 01-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2010
Awesome..your thoughts and the stars..Thank You! Carol
PS My muse forced me to do it! Really..you can trust me to tell you the truth....
Comment from Southern Writer
Welllllllll, I was feeling so sorry for the poor girl and then I just got mad at everyone for upsetting her.
But, it really is a cute story, and I guess I was as fooled as Shelly. Having so many levels to the joke was a great idea. Of course, now, you are stuck writing the "payback" story for poor Shelly.
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2010
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Welllllllll, I was feeling so sorry for the poor girl and then I just got mad at everyone for upsetting her.
But, it really is a cute story, and I guess I was as fooled as Shelly. Having so many levels to the joke was a great idea. Of course, now, you are stuck writing the "payback" story for poor Shelly.
Comment Written 01-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2010
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Thanks for enjoying the story..Smiles, Carol
Comment from c_lucas
This is very well written and is very believeable. There is a smooth flow of words, making for an easy read. There is good imagery and descriptive scheme.
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2010
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This is very well written and is very believeable. There is a smooth flow of words, making for an easy read. There is good imagery and descriptive scheme.
Comment Written 01-Nov-2010
reply by the author on 01-Nov-2010
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Charlie,
Thanks for the review. Appreciate you stopping by..Carol
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You're welcome, Carol. Charlie