Flash Fiction
Viewing comments for Chapter 21 "Unnamed and Untamed"Collection of Flash, Micro, etc.
40 total reviews
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello author,
oh your entry is so darn sad and drastic.
I found you entry so vivid and hard to view the death of such a beautiful horse.
Gert
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2010
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Hello author,
oh your entry is so darn sad and drastic.
I found you entry so vivid and hard to view the death of such a beautiful horse.
Gert
Comment Written 21-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2010
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Gert,
Me too! A part of life but one we would rather not endure. Smiles to you
Comment from Fireshadow
Wow! This is such a powerfully poignant storyline. That you were able to narrate it in a micro-fiction format is brilliant work. Surely this will be a strong contender in the contest. Good luck. Amarillys
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2010
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Wow! This is such a powerfully poignant storyline. That you were able to narrate it in a micro-fiction format is brilliant work. Surely this will be a strong contender in the contest. Good luck. Amarillys
Comment Written 21-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2010
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Amarillys,
Thank you for your wonderful and kind review. I truly appreciate your comments and wishes. Smiles to you
Comment from Shirley McLain
Excellent micro-fiction. You have the adventure and hook at the beginning and kept my eyes glued to the page. The horse is a lovely picture.
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2010
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Excellent micro-fiction. You have the adventure and hook at the beginning and kept my eyes glued to the page. The horse is a lovely picture.
Comment Written 21-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2010
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Texasgal,
A beautiful specimen isn't he? Thanks for the wonderful thoughts. Smiles to you...
Comment from zoocq
Very interesting story line in micro fiction. Vivid images...it would do well as a story fleshed out and an en joyable read I'm sure. Thank you.
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2010
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Very interesting story line in micro fiction. Vivid images...it would do well as a story fleshed out and an en joyable read I'm sure. Thank you.
Comment Written 21-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2010
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Zoocq,
I too can imagine a longer story..darn these flash fictions, we are so restricted...maybe another time. Thank you....
Comment from vandawalker
Was your inspiration this beautiful picture? This is quite a story of intense emotions even coming from the grand stallion. I enjoyed this very much.
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2010
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Was your inspiration this beautiful picture? This is quite a story of intense emotions even coming from the grand stallion. I enjoyed this very much.
Comment Written 21-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2010
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Vandawalker,
No, I had to search the net for the picture but I suppose somewhere in the recesses of my foggy brain I remembered a story about a wild stallion. Thank you...
Comment from RebelRose
An interesting story. I know it had to be short for this micro-fiction contest but I think this could be incorporated into a longer story. Your descriptive words made the reader feel as if witnessing the scene first-hand. Well done.
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2010
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An interesting story. I know it had to be short for this micro-fiction contest but I think this could be incorporated into a longer story. Your descriptive words made the reader feel as if witnessing the scene first-hand. Well done.
Comment Written 21-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 22-Aug-2010
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Patti,
Many have suggested it be a longer story..I shall have to consider it. Thanks for reading and for the kind thoughts. Smiles to you
Comment from RKagan
This story paints a very vivid picture. I can see the entire landscape. The animal recognizing his coming death is very true, somehow they do know. the art work is perfect for the piece. good job
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2010
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This story paints a very vivid picture. I can see the entire landscape. The animal recognizing his coming death is very true, somehow they do know. the art work is perfect for the piece. good job
Comment Written 21-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2010
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RKagan,
Thankyou ufor continuing to support me..Hope to be back full force soon. Smiles, Carol
Comment from JoAnna77
You have told this tragic story well in just 102 words. I particularly like the description of the wild stallion standing on the cliff edge, and the final sentence.
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2010
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You have told this tragic story well in just 102 words. I particularly like the description of the wild stallion standing on the cliff edge, and the final sentence.
Comment Written 21-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2010
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Thank you..smiles to you
Comment from mtngalofnc
Hi Carol,
Wow! What a story and so well written in so few words. Your imagery is great and it was easy to envision this scene and has a smooth flow. Good job and thank you for sharing. Best wishes with this contest.
Becky
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2010
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Hi Carol,
Wow! What a story and so well written in so few words. Your imagery is great and it was easy to envision this scene and has a smooth flow. Good job and thank you for sharing. Best wishes with this contest.
Becky
Comment Written 21-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2010
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Becky,
Thank you...smiles to you
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your welcome.
Comment from misscookie
Oh that artwork is outstasnding. I do have a love for horses you know. Ythe artwork is perfect for the picture. Just reading the first line had my heart beating fast this was very exciting
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2010
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Oh that artwork is outstasnding. I do have a love for horses you know. Ythe artwork is perfect for the picture. Just reading the first line had my heart beating fast this was very exciting
Comment Written 21-Aug-2010
reply by the author on 08-Sep-2010
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Cookie, Thank you..smiles to you
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Don't worry be HAPPY!!!! AND KEEP SMILING
