Comment from Alexander E Poet

Excellent

I thought this was good, I thought the lyrics were realistic, a convey the actual reality of some human beings males that is, I thought it was truthful and well done, passionate and sincere. Well done no errors of mistakes Alexander five S T A R S

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2010

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reply by the author on 17-Feb-2010

Thanks Alexander!
It is true for some guys, but we know you can't group everyone into one single category.
I am glad you enjoyed it my friend!
Curt

Comment from keithchris

Excellent

Sounds like three four time would fit this well. I can't tell you how great my wife thought this was. And being the musician she would know best. As for the poetic, it's as cute as it could be. Thanks for some good ole funny

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2010

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reply by the author on 17-Feb-2010

Thank you my friend, that is truly high praise and I don't take it lightly. I really appreciate the musician opinion, and the beat is exactly what it is in. Kind of a G-C-D chord on the guitar.
I hope to put it to music soon.
Thank you again for the comments, that makes my day.
Curt

Comment from AmorGentil

Excellent

What a song to be singed by a country music singer
I think it will be a hit, think about it, people like this kind
Of letter in musical rimes.

Good composition.

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2010

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reply by the author on 17-Feb-2010

Thank you my friend, I am going to record this as soon as I can, and I hope to have it ready by spring.
I ttruly appreciate your kind comments,
Curt

Comment from Maria C.

Excellent

So funny in a discusting, sad sort of way. I had to chuckle through it though. The refrain is excellent as are the descriptions of the women. Great picture for your write.
Maria C.

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2010

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reply by the author on 17-Feb-2010

Thanks Maria!
The humor is all in fun, albeit with a grain of truth at the middle of this "black pearl" of comedy!
I appreciate your thoughts,
Curt

Comment from sgalletti

Excellent

Curt--Absolutely hilarious and a great deal of fun! I especially love your refrain so much that I found myself repeating it throughout the piece. There must be SOME truth for you to relate so well to this wonderful curmudgeon, LOL. Sue

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2010

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reply by the author on 17-Feb-2010

Thanks Sue!
I have to admit that I have had some experience in the fine art of "picking up a stray," but that was a long time ago! Nowdays, I'd rather watch a good movie at home, alone!
Thanks for the great comments and I'm glad you got a laugh from this bit of warped humor!
Curt

Comment from Judian James

Excellent

That's not your photo?? Hey Curt. This brought about many "eeewwwwww" moments and some pretty strong visuals.
Very foolish and lots of fun. Rhyme and meter perfect.

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2010

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reply by the author on 17-Feb-2010

Hey Jude, don't get sick on me now! You know me, I have to cross all boundaries and markers of common sense and let the wild side loose once in awhile!
And that could be me, but I have one or two teeth left.
Thanks for stopping in Jude and I hope you at least smiled at my warped humor.
Curt

reply by Judian James on 17-Feb-2010

Did you read Margaret's piece "The Cord of Life"? She mentions you in the author's notes. It's superb!!

reply by the author on 17-Feb-2010

Yes, it made me cry. She is such a saint, a heart as big as Texas and a soul straight from God.

reply by Judian James on 17-Feb-2010

I couldn't agree with you more.

Comment from Begin Again

Excellent

Curt,

This is absolutely hilarious...Your guy should hook up with my Drusilla I just posted...I'm sure they'd love each other...

Your sense of humor is outstanding. Are you going to set this little ditty to music and make a million?

Smiles, Carol

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2010

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reply by the author on 17-Feb-2010

Thanks Carol!
I have music for this, I am waitiing on a friend to help me record it, and who knows?
I'm so glad you got a laugh from this, my whole intent was to bring a little smile through the clouds.
Curt

Comment from jayhawk67

Excellent

Yeah, that pretty much sums up the plight of those who have not settled down. Sounds like Warren Zevon (RIP) might have come up with something like this on one of his benders.
At the same time it can help us look at life with a clearer head and more resolve to our purpose.
Fun read, my friend.
Ciao, jayhawk 67
Who posed for your artwork?

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2010

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reply by the author on 17-Feb-2010

Thanks my friend,
I was thinking more like Rodney Carrington, my "werewolf" man would do!
The pic came from the net after a search for, well, you know.
Curt

Comment from Aplgwest

Excellent

That guy wouldn't look so bad with some dentures and a bit of a trim. Rather than disgusting, consider "broad-minded." Funny poem!

At your convenience, please check out my portfolio as I never seem to accumulate points enough to stay on the list.

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2010

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reply by the author on 17-Feb-2010

Well, that is the first comment about the pic that was even remotely positive! (lol)
I will look at your port, but if you read my profile, you must know you are asking the lion to join the congregation of christians. I make no promises, but I will take a peek to see what you have.
Curt

reply by Aplgwest on 17-Feb-2010

I don't care about stars but value valid criticism from poets I admire. So you fit the bill.

Comment from laurelp

Excellent

Well, that was an interesting read. Writing from your heart are you. Funny and disgusting all at once. But then the odd male writer needs encouragement too. (Couldn't resist.) I did (in a weird way) enjoy the read.

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2010

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reply by the author on 17-Feb-2010

Thank you!
If your lips even curved upwards in the slightest, I feel honored!
I have had an episode or two of "coyote love" in my youth, but those days are long past, especially since I don't go to bars any more!
I'm glad you enjoyed the warped humor, weird or not!
Curt