Dear Elvis Presley
A letter to an Unrequited Love24 total reviews
Comment from AnnaLinda
missmerri,
Aloha!! LOL Bravo!! You were so creative with this!! I don't believe it! What a masterpiece! It was very entertaining to read. I love your use of his song titles in this poem. How could he say no?? to you??
Here are some of my favorite parts, not all of them:
"but I am hoping, through this letter, soon
you'll understand the reason that I swoon"
"I'm All Shook Up, but That's All Right. I know
Heartbreak Hotel is where I need to go."
"If you would Love Me Tender, I would choose
to not step on your lovely Blue Suede Shoes."
"Suspicious Minds may think this isn't real,
but I'm explaining how I truly feel."
And your ending!!"Don't Be Cruel to a heart that's true." Oh my!!! I love this poem!
SweetLinda
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2009
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missmerri,
Aloha!! LOL Bravo!! You were so creative with this!! I don't believe it! What a masterpiece! It was very entertaining to read. I love your use of his song titles in this poem. How could he say no?? to you??
Here are some of my favorite parts, not all of them:
"but I am hoping, through this letter, soon
you'll understand the reason that I swoon"
"I'm All Shook Up, but That's All Right. I know
Heartbreak Hotel is where I need to go."
"If you would Love Me Tender, I would choose
to not step on your lovely Blue Suede Shoes."
"Suspicious Minds may think this isn't real,
but I'm explaining how I truly feel."
And your ending!!"Don't Be Cruel to a heart that's true." Oh my!!! I love this poem!
SweetLinda
Comment Written 14-Nov-2009
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2009
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Thank you my dear, loyal encourager! I'm so glad you were entertained. You are too sweet, as usual.
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Oh! That was hysterical!!!!
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"Thank you... thank you very much" (quick bow)
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"Are you lonesome tonight"? LOL
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Yes... Elvis has left the building. : (
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LOL!!!
Comment from gudbjorg
This is a beautiful poem about love that lasts and is forever. Like to send a poem I wrote about these kind of deep love that lasts forever.
He is the one I love so much,
His tender eyes, His slightest touch.
Unearthly is His deepest look,
lovely like a sparkling brook.
His words are music to my ears,
deeper than my heart can share.
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2009
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This is a beautiful poem about love that lasts and is forever. Like to send a poem I wrote about these kind of deep love that lasts forever.
He is the one I love so much,
His tender eyes, His slightest touch.
Unearthly is His deepest look,
lovely like a sparkling brook.
His words are music to my ears,
deeper than my heart can share.
Comment Written 14-Nov-2009
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2009
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Thank you for sharing your poem, sarahice. It sounds like a true love poem. Mine... not so true. I appreciate your kind review.
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Thank you so much for your quick reply.
Love you,
Sarah
Comment from The Guardian
This is superb! Although I had to chuckle when the narrator wrote "to captivate and win just one embrace
from one I have not met yet, face to face."
Love how you embed song titles within the verse. Rhyme and metre work nicely.
Good luck. So many great entries.
Merle
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2009
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This is superb! Although I had to chuckle when the narrator wrote "to captivate and win just one embrace
from one I have not met yet, face to face."
Love how you embed song titles within the verse. Rhyme and metre work nicely.
Good luck. So many great entries.
Merle
Comment Written 14-Nov-2009
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2009
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Thank you for your kind review. I'm pleased if you got at least one chuckle out of it. Did you see the author notes?
Some of us are always running a little behind. :-)
Comment from IndianaIrish
Hello Miss Merri! What an entertaining poem. It's creative and made me smile with all the song titles. I just may have to have an Elvis concert here tonight. Best wishes in the contest!
Indy :>)
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reply by the author on 14-Nov-2009
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Hello Miss Merri! What an entertaining poem. It's creative and made me smile with all the song titles. I just may have to have an Elvis concert here tonight. Best wishes in the contest!
Indy :>)
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Comment Written 14-Nov-2009
reply by the author on 14-Nov-2009
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Thank you for noticing the song titles. I hoped it would be clear. My mother loved Elvis' music so I've heard a lot of it. This was fun to do. Thanks for tuning in. :P