POEMS, SONGS AND NOTES
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Comment from Mastery
Excellent poetry, Carol...He reminds me of another boy in some ways...They all do...Good luck to you in the contest..Bob
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Excellent poetry, Carol...He reminds me of another boy in some ways...They all do...Good luck to you in the contest..Bob
Comment Written 03-Nov-2009
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Bob
Maybe they are best friends by now..looking down on us. That's a nice thought to think about...we are friends and they are friends...Smiling . Thanks for the review. CArol
Comment from hfriscia
This is a really great poem, especially in 15 words or less...The lines and rythmeing scheme works well...It definitely deserves a six star rating.
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This is a really great poem, especially in 15 words or less...The lines and rythmeing scheme works well...It definitely deserves a six star rating.
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hfriscia
Thank you so much for understanding the emotions inside those fifteen words. I appreciate the comments and the stars. That was so nice of you.
smiles. Carol
Comment from fantasychild
This is reallly pretty. Its true that children can be and are considered gifts from gods, angels, or both. I think you also used a great photo, too.
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This is reallly pretty. Its true that children can be and are considered gifts from gods, angels, or both. I think you also used a great photo, too.
Comment Written 03-Nov-2009
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fantasy
The photo is my son ...taken just before he died. I am glad that you enjoyed it. Carol
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Sorry if I touched up on some bad memories. No offense intended. Though I think the poem and the picyure go very well together. ^-^
Comment from maxic59
A well deserved all time best award for your poem about your son, a true angel.
a precious picture also.
onya mate
cheers max
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A well deserved all time best award for your poem about your son, a true angel.
a precious picture also.
onya mate
cheers max
Comment Written 03-Nov-2009
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Max
He had a smile that could captivate anyone. Thank you for the kind comments. CArol
Comment from Phil Kitom
Oh what a lovely photo and a delightful
tribute to a wonderful boy who lives
in the heart and soul of a most beautiful
and pretty lady.
Excellent tribute Carol xxx phil
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Oh what a lovely photo and a delightful
tribute to a wonderful boy who lives
in the heart and soul of a most beautiful
and pretty lady.
Excellent tribute Carol xxx phil
Comment Written 03-Nov-2009
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Phil
I was hoping you would see my beautiful boy...His smile still helps me make it through some difficult days. I have that picture by my computer. Thank you very much for the most kind words. You will make me blush all the way across that ocean. Thank you! You are my most favorite gentleman on this site...You have a heart of gold and you aren't afraid to show it. Smiles and hugs, CArol
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lots of kisses for you Carol xxx
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Carol, do not blush, just bathe in the warmth that
radiates from one heart to another.
Your delightful lttle boy walks beside you and
you are only separated by a thin veil that will
on day disappear to bring you both into each
others arms once more. Waters can separate
bodies, but souls will forever blend together
and find love, peace and happiness. xxx phil
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Phil
You are so special...Every time I get frustrated with this site..you show up and remind me how great my new found friends are. You will always hold a very special place in my heart...Thanks Smiles and Hugs, Carol
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And huge smiles and hugs to you dear friend...
Comment from Joan E.
Thank you very much for sharing your memories and special gift. His smile is unforgettable. You have crafted a powerful, heartfelt short poem, which I am sure will be a strong contender in the contest.
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Thank you very much for sharing your memories and special gift. His smile is unforgettable. You have crafted a powerful, heartfelt short poem, which I am sure will be a strong contender in the contest.
Comment Written 03-Nov-2009
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Joan
Thank you...his smile is unforgettable. Every morning I look at him and remember just how happy he was. I was blessed if only for a short time. Thanks
Carol
Comment from Abba Lin
i LOVE YOUR POEM, I THINK OF MY GRANDCHILDREN AND HOW I FOUND SUCH LOVE FOR THEM AS THEY DID ME. I THINK BEING A GRAND MA IS ABOUT THE BEST THING IN LIFE... LOVE YOUR WORDS, SO TRUE AND WELL SPOKEN...LOVE LIN
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i LOVE YOUR POEM, I THINK OF MY GRANDCHILDREN AND HOW I FOUND SUCH LOVE FOR THEM AS THEY DID ME. I THINK BEING A GRAND MA IS ABOUT THE BEST THING IN LIFE... LOVE YOUR WORDS, SO TRUE AND WELL SPOKEN...LOVE LIN
Comment Written 03-Nov-2009
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Abba Lin
I have become a great grandma during this year...time marches by so fast! Thanks for your kind review. CArol
Comment from TheBritsWife
Hi Carol, Thank you for sharing Michael with us. He was a gorgeous little boy, and his beautiful innocent soul shines all over his sweet face. Your poem is a lovely tribute to your love for each other. I know that Michael is always with you! I'm so sorry that he had to leave so soon, but his love will live on forever. - Karen
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Hi Carol, Thank you for sharing Michael with us. He was a gorgeous little boy, and his beautiful innocent soul shines all over his sweet face. Your poem is a lovely tribute to your love for each other. I know that Michael is always with you! I'm so sorry that he had to leave so soon, but his love will live on forever. - Karen
Comment Written 03-Nov-2009
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Karen
Thank you for the wonderful and kind words. I just wanted you to see him precious smiling face and know a moment of him. Thanks so much. CArol
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That moment told his lifetime's story. Such a beautiful little boy!
Comment from mrsmajor
A wonderful tribute to a beautiful little boy, he will always be with you. Memories can always be cherished, and mean so much.
Thanks for sharing this piece, and showing us how handsome he will always be.
God Bless..
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A wonderful tribute to a beautiful little boy, he will always be with you. Memories can always be cherished, and mean so much.
Thanks for sharing this piece, and showing us how handsome he will always be.
God Bless..
Comment Written 03-Nov-2009
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MrsMajor
Thank you for your kind comments. He certainly was a handsome boy with one fantastic smile. Appreciate the review. CArol
You're quite welcome, Carol,
Warm Regards
Comment from Margo Starchild
A beautiful piece that bares your soul and such an inspiring photo that completes it. Thank you for sharing this, it was one of the rare poems that moves me to tears. Thank you again x
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A beautiful piece that bares your soul and such an inspiring photo that completes it. Thank you for sharing this, it was one of the rare poems that moves me to tears. Thank you again x
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Margo
He will send you a special smile because you were moved by his. Thank you so much for reading and understanding. Carol